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Reviews for Drabble Collection

By : Lunapokema
  • From scuzme on March 10, 2009
    please write more i am loving your stories to bits! oooh how bout a story about sena training in the rain and getting soaked and muddy hiruma would totally molest him :3 then again he always does lol
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  • From Nenshogin22 on July 01, 2008
    yep this is like my umphed time reading this so id though id review for once lol
    but n e way lunapoke all these little drabbles would be much better continued

    oh yes much better except for the one where sena dies that was sad... stupid sad ones making people cry
    n e ways i like all ur eyeshield stories but u need to write more because no one else has a complete grasp of the characters like u

    so wrtie a long fic wit extra smut and deticate to me cuase i support all ur stories u write even if ive never heard of that certain anime lol

    k peace
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK (too lazy to sign in) on September 19, 2006
    Awwws, these are really cute! Keep it up, okies?
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  • From ANON - Werefox Alchemist on July 20, 2006
    Luna, you are a fantastic writer. *Hugs* There is not nearly enough Eyesield stuff on the net... And there's even less on here than on normal fanfiction. Bravo to you.
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  • From ANON - Sami on January 31, 2006
    you should include the lemons that are cut off. They'd be so hot.
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on January 13, 2006
    Another update! And I see you've added another story! I think we're the only two populating the Eyeshield 21 fics on aff..-sniffs-
    So this means I have to keep writing with fiery passion and and and I hope you do the same as well! This chapter sure made me think of what Hiruma's hands would feel like running over my flesh and thats..really hot. lol
    Hope you add another hot lemony hinting chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on January 11, 2006
    Eyaahhh Sena kun is so cute..lol I have noticed a pattern in your drabble collection, Hiruma is asleep for most of Sena's excursions. Its funny, poor Sena turns sneaky to help his beloved Hirumakun whenever he falls asleep. If I were Hiruma Id be paranoid to fall asleep for fear of the 'kuso chibi' sneaking up on me to fuss over me. Though...it might be kinda nice..-shifty eyes-
    Anyways, hope you add another chapter soon!
    Your fan, Biokun
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on January 11, 2006
    -cries- omg, it cut off the rest of my last review. bastard review thingeh!
    Anyways... Hot chapter..lol First Hiruma/Sena water makeout scene Ive ever reado-o
    On to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on January 11, 2006
    Yayyy this is your fan and fellow sena/hiruma writer Biokun
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on January 11, 2006
    Chapter "untold moment":

    HELL YEAH!!! this is what happened after that *shudders* horrible, HORRIBLE hirumamo "moment" =_=x. Now I can safely read Eyeshield 21 again thanks to your little drabble! Although i am really scared, because I heard that in the anime and in the manga are way too many of hirumamo hints TT_TT, I just don't feel safe!! *covers herself with hirusena doujinshis*.
    Now, seriously, this was way cute, I loved imagining Sena with wide eyes holding the pack of ice and Hiruma giving up. CUTE. Frigging cute. Screw the bandage Mamori did. Lately your drabbles are getting longer, and the narration is more fluid. (ass kissing so you can provide me of more hirusena, but it is objective comment nonetheless) You're having less typos and avoid using acronyms, which makes the final draft look a lot better (I think I only saw two or three typos in the last drabbles). But what I like more is that you're improving while writing something as smutt-able as hirusena =P

    S-Sena with big puppy dog eyes... looking all hurt... @_@ I need a cold shower. NOW.
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on January 08, 2006
    *whimper*
    *whine*
    *whimper*
    *pout*

    Drabble collection, YAY! Sweet and well written. There are tiny mistakes here and there, and it is too short (hey, what can I say, I like your writting and love the pairing) but overall excellent! That being said; what the heck is I Love You, Goodbye? I mean don't get me wrong, it was still well written, but...but...but.... wtf?!?!!??! **Sits over in the corner and pouts** Okay, done now. Keep up the good work, I really do love the stories and there aren't enough fics in the fandom so *applause's great job* *smiles* More Please!
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on January 07, 2006
    "I love you, Goodbye" chapter:

    W.T.F~~~~~~~~~????? @_@
    Y--y-you... killed.... Sena.... *prepares weapons of mass destruction*

    Ok, what happened here?? this is way too angsty, how did Sena actually die? Was being Eyeshield 21 too much for his little body? I still hate Mamori, this has another good reason. Leave them alone, byatch!!! *kicks Mamori away*. No seriously, even if it was angst (I love it as long as the main couple that i like doesnt die... XD) this was beautiful, short as always, but well written nonetheless. That ending indeed reminded me of Romeo And Juliet, although it was far more cryptic (everything happened in the morgue... and Sena on an autopsy table) than Romeo And Juliet. Screw those two, HiruSena looks better =_=

    I think I deserve a HiruSena fix after reading this. *goes to open the secret vault with her hirusena doujinshis*
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on January 07, 2006
    Crowds:

    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    New HiruSena drabbles! ok, this is pure fluff, I loved it, LOVED it @_@, It made me remember of some mini-manga I saw in a japanese website, but this is so so so so so so so so so cute O_< *thumbs up*

    No smutt? this sucks!!! (i did a 180 change huh? hahahaha... ha... ha... ha... *no smutt* @_@)

    First of all, I think Hiruma should go with Sena on the bus everyday, that way he has a good excuse to hug him XP. I know I would, screw my own schedule, I would rearrange it so i could meet Sena (Now i'm a downright spooky stalker)
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Fan on January 02, 2006
    Owww...cute moments between Sena and Hiruma...lol...love them!!! Looking forward to some more ^ ^
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  • From ANON - fuyutu on December 29, 2005
    Aww, I just love mistletoe fics! This one was ultra cuteness! More fanart comes to mind!!!
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