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Reviews for The Replacement

By : PrinceYuki
  • From on June 16, 2006
    OMFG you can't leave off there. GRRR Update!!!! Some YukixKyo stuf is good. Haru is pissed, Yuki is pissed everyone is pissed now. Oh can't wait I want more!!!!
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  • From ANON - littlefiction on January 31, 2006
    Poor Aaya, what will he do if he hears about this? I can't even imagine. No, I can. He'd smile, that horribly unconvincing sad smile, and maybe braid his hair, before moving on and pretending to be shallow and unaffected. And poor Yuki, he finally gets the courage to accept his feelings, and then put himself out there like that, and what happens? the person he loves gets hurt. And then Haru, who is so torn between the two brothers. So sad, so dramatic. I hope Kyo will be ok, after all, a blow to the head like that is certainly something unfortunate, and I would hate for him to have any perminant damage. Eagarly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you so much for not ending it at 4, I was so happy to see this chapter, and it did not dissapoint.
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  • From ANON - kimper on January 31, 2006
    what a wonderful chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work!

    kimper :)
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  • From ANON - littlefiction on January 21, 2006
    Oh, please do continue this, I didn't realize you were done and I've been checking almost daily waiting for the next chapter, I love this story and I really hope you will continue it. Such a smooth transition from a simple diversion to falling for each other, and the inner turmoil Haru is experiencing is wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Kikvws on January 15, 2006
    Whoa! This is definitely one of the best FB ficcies I've ever read...nice lemons, and pretty realistic reactions on both their parts. Excellent!

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  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on January 14, 2006
    Are you going going to include Kyo in the mix? That would be fantastic! A hot threesome with no Yuki, cause I don't like cause he is just TOO girly looking. Anyways, great work! I can't wait for the next chappie!~
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  • From ANON - Luciferian on January 11, 2006
    AWWW its so cute i love it simply love it, although its better to stay as a one off i still giggle everytime ayame speaks though :D
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  • From ANON - eppy on January 01, 2006
    yea i love your story so far i can't wait to read the next chapters!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Someone on December 20, 2005
    That's a little depressing but very well written and I loved the lemon I was practically drooling on my keyboard. xD Oh well though great story again hope to read more of your work in the future.
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  • From ANON - awwwww on December 16, 2005
    I want another chapter, maybe he learns that he really wasn't a replacement and maybe they love each other??? could happen... this was cute
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  • From ANON - MystressCyanide on December 15, 2005
    That was hot and sweet and kind of sad all at the same time...excellent work!
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  • From PrinceYuki on December 14, 2005
    Thank you all for the love and support of my story. Since my other story hasn't gotten to that particular part yet this was my first actual LEMON seen with two men and I was very nervous as to see the outcome with peoples reactions but I am pleasantly surprised to see so many people enjoying it. That makes me very happy.

    I have had so many request to keep this story going I am seriously considering it. Everyone who has read it and contacted me through my email is constantly telling me how much they want more and I'm not sure I can hold that off much longer. I am sure of one thing though that I have to put another chapter on Mortality before I add anything to this one or even consider it because that one was first and people have waited longer.

    I apologize for grammatical and spelling errors particularily in the beging when it says Haru is sitting...and taking a test or something and I left the word 'desk' out and when Ayame reaches into his color and pulls out his long hair reading his back wow that one really bothers me its supposed to be reaches into his collar and pulls out his long hair reaching to his knees so I am so sorry about that one I am seriously considering editing the chapter and re-submiting it and deleting the original because of that error.

    Sorry I kind of tend to babble a little the whole point of this is to thank everyone for their support and for the request to keep this story going. I am seriously going to consider this request and since HaruxAyame are the main couple if anyone would like to see another couple spring forth from this story please let me know and I can see how I can work that into the story...IF I continue.

    Thank again everyone I love you all!!!

    Nine-Chan
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  • From ANON - kimper on December 14, 2005
    That was really good. I would love to see another chapter!

    kimper :)
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on December 13, 2005
    it would be a crying shame if this didn't go pass the first chapter. so please cont. this story and i swear i will review every chapter you put out. this was soooo good and one of my secret favorite pairings.


    so please don't put the pot on the back burner^_^V
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  • From ANON - crimson psycho on December 12, 2005
    This is a really wonderfull story. There is not nearly enough of this pairing. I really like the way you had written out both Ayame's and Haru's points of view. I hope this story is not a one shot. It would be great to see how their relationship could develop further.
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