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Reviews for A Hundred and One Kisses

By : Altariel
  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2009
    I only read the first chapter, which I found very cute, but the insertion of Japanese words between English are just too weird and annoying. Does it mean they're talking in both languages? I just don't get this fad.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on June 28, 2006
    Reading this series of one shots is fascinating because I can see such marked improvements in your writing with each chapter. Chapter four though was so unexpected. At first I was thinking "OMG, that's so wrong, Fujitaka and Yuki should not be together," but then I thought about it and remembers that there are hints that some of Clow Reed's essence has been reincarnated into Fujitaka. From that point of view, the two of them getting together makes such a strange sort of sense. And then we have that little side dish of angst that Touya cares for Yuki, but Yuki's with his *Dad*. Really well written.

    Loved chapter three as well, so rare is it that you get to see Touya express his true feelings. It was also a nice touch for him to reach for his magic out of reflex only for it to be gone. That's something that would take a very long time to get used to.

    Hehe, Chapter five had such a devious Yuki. That was just great, I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Ekki on December 21, 2005

    I agree that this is very well written, but a suggestion; You're usage of Japanese as dialogue really disrupts the flow of things. Not only do the non-Japanese speaking readers have to, a - scroll down to the bottom to look it up, or b - just keep going and hope that they get the gist of it, should you make a mistake, the people who can speak Japanese will pick up on it. Sometimes the safest, more mundane route is the better alternative, even without the dash of exoticism that is a foreign language.

    Also, despite the fact that I last saw CCS yonks ago, Yue doesn't strike me the type to say things like damn, nor call people by their names if possible. Could be just me, though. >_>;;

    But otherwise, I can't pick out much more. Hope to see more soon. 8D
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