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Reviews for Christmas Present

By : Lunapokema
  • From ANON - jasminelove on August 26, 2006
    Wow---o! That was hot. I love it when the ukes crossdress so that they could get their semes to fuck them!! This was a great story. I'm waiting for the next chapter or sumthing. Not a lot of people write stories for Eyeshield21. I suppose it's not as popular. But the couple Hiruma and Sena is just sooo perfect and hot! I don't like the MamoriXHiruma couple. This story just proves how right the SenaXHiruma coupling is!!! Good luck with future writing!!!

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  • From ANON - Werefox Alchemist on July 27, 2006
    I read the watered-down version on fanfiction.net and after spending two monthes trying to find the lemon, finally came upon this. The following is all I now or ever will have to say on the subject: If there was a goddess of wrting HirumaxSena fanfiction, you would be it. I bow down to you. *Bows, lights scented candles*
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  • From ANON - devil522 on July 09, 2006
    I love hiruma/sena pairings! I can't really imagine sena in that sexy secretary outfit.I liked the part when hiruma finds a note about not opening before Xmas and fucked sena after that.^ ^
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  • From ANON - Sami on January 31, 2006
    I'm just wondering, Why did Sena taste like peppermint? What did he go through earlier? Could you write a side story for that. I'd love to know.
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on December 21, 2005
    YYYAAAHAAA!!
    -glomps enthusiastically and huggles near to death-
    ano ano ano ano that was really really sezzy and well-written ;-;!
    Im so glad that you added even just one more fic to this section. I am highly appreciating the little tidbits of translated doujinshi that you sent me-wipes drool from corner of mouth and clears throat quickly-yesyes, i enjoy them very much so!^^;;
    Lemon chapter eeeee...prettiful!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    Yow!!... I need to take a shower now... a very Cold shower. Love it!!
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