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Reviews for Fun for the Whole Family

By : scarychicks
  • From ANON - gabby on February 09, 2006
    this
    story
    had
    hot parts
    was well written
    but didn't
    make me come...
    nice try though...
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  • From ANON - yo yo ma on January 04, 2006
    That was a well written and in depth rape story, but I have one question. Wasn't Midvalley gay? He seemed to like Meryl's stuff too much for a gay man. Or maybe I'm confusing him and the sax player in Cowboy Bebop...anyway good story.
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  • From on December 26, 2005
    Sick, twisted and disturbing. And I liked it that way.
    I must say the use of Legato was definately interesting. :D
    ~teardropdangel~
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  • From ANON - sara on December 23, 2005
    That was HOT and really well-written. Hope you write more...chapter 2 maybe?
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  • From ANON - GrensWench on December 22, 2005
    FUN FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY indeed! Granted, rape is not everyone’s cuppa tea, but for the rape enthusiast this fanfic is a slice of heaven!
    Evilmouse never fails to please with high quality, intelligently written smut. The characters are finely crafted and little details create a rich texture despite the brevity of the story. In particular, Elendira’s introduction was an elegant foreshadowing of her true nature, and Meryl seeing her reflection in Hoppered’s armor while being plowed by Midvalley was brilliant. There’s even room for a refreshing touch of humor (“I know, I’ve got great recovery time”.) Somehow Evilmouse just knows which buttons to push to get me twitching! The bad guys are gratifyingly nasty and Meryl’s defilement exquisite. Face it the little priss had it coming! I can’t wait for the rest of the gung ho gang to get in on this. More DP’s please!!!


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