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By : YaoiMuffin
  • From Reyn on January 29, 2006
    YaY! You updated!

    Argh, I'm also a Zoro/Sanji fan, so I'm almosted tempted to turn around my advice and have Sanji compete with Luffy for Zoro's affections. But that wouldn't work because Zoro is totally dedicated to Luffy.

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  • From ANON - sinsoftime on January 28, 2006
    *sweat drops* k it's cute. Realy. But do you think you could make the chapters just a little longer? I know you probably don't want the story to go to fast, but if you don't write more into your chapters you won't go anywhere at all. other than the shortness, the only other complaint i have is the lack of action. *grinns* but that's just my perverted fan girl side talking. All in all, I love it to death. (this is the first one peice fic I've ever read and I think this is becomeing my favorite pairing.....I realy do like it a lot.^_^) Please update soon. This reveiw was also writen so that your head won't explode. I have seen that happen before, and you're right, it is not pretty. *straight face* I have a mop and some simple green if you need it though. Update soon, i await your next chapter eagerly (oh, and though i'm not one to talk, your grammar needs work. *laughs* So does mine though, so you can ignore me, I'm rambling now. Sorry)
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  • From ANON - Noriko Sakuma on January 28, 2006
    Yay! New chappie *dances*

    I'm really enjoying this fic ^3^All the details makes me hapoy |3

    Can't wait to see more (and Sanji as a rival YAY! *0*)
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  • From ANON - lady k on January 25, 2006
    Yosh! First of all, Just wanted to say that this wasn't bad and has alot of potiential. You keep the story in first person pretty well. I think the only thing that comes off as a hinderance, is at times it seems that Zoro talks in circles. For instance the repetion of his admirationfor Luffy. It is important to mention, just not every other sentence. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Phidias Bagel on January 20, 2006
    Great Story! I love this pairing and think that there should be much much more of it! Please update again soon(Or I'll die waiting for it)
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  • From ANON - Senera San on January 19, 2006
    yay ^_^ I like updates! though the chapters are a bit short.. but still great, don't worry!
    Is it a ZoLu.. I like that better because LuZo seems .. weird in a way.. @_@
    anyway.. I get the update, you get the review! nice deal right? *blows kisses*
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on January 18, 2006
    My 20/20 vision won't let me hit my Luffy or my Zoro!!! *cleans her thick glasses*

    Hehehe, I just want Sanji to appear, so we can have some sanlu thrown in the mix!!! (not zosan or sanzo, AGK)

    Are you going to ignore captain Kuro? I don't think it's necessary to mention the enemies, unless of course some of Zoro's feelings are depicted on the fights.
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  • From ANON - Noriko_Sakuma on January 18, 2006
    UPDATE YAY!!! (I'll keep looking for this fic no matter what *0*!!!)

    I love it! Zoro is forgiven nyaw! (I wonder If he would get jealous of Sanji too... xD sorry i just love that trio)

    And well, to be honest I prefer ZoroxLuffy (dunno why, I just got a thin for it lol)

    Oooh, and you have a lj account? what's your user name? mine es nuriko_sakuma (somebody already has noriko with 'o' T^T)

    anyways, keep writing!! *takes out a whip* º.º... xD no honest, take your time =3 I'll be waiting for actualization all the time ^^
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  • From ANON - simpleinsanity on January 18, 2006
    how about for the next chapter, u do the scene where Luffy fell off a cliff and the crew doesn''t know where he is and zoro goes all cray looking for him? then have lots of smut from zoro. because he is relieved luffy is safe. ^_~ sorry, just wanted to cram some smut in ther XP can ya blame me. :D
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  • From yukikoangel on January 18, 2006
    I'll review until I died :D Still Yukiko only this time log on ^^
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  • From Reyn on January 18, 2006
    hooray! Zoro's forgiven!

    (struggles to remember the next Zoro/Luffy point in the serires) I've been reading ahead in the manga (is currently on ch 250-something), so it's hard to remember something from so long ago. oo! I do remember when they were on the Baratie (or w/e it's called) and Luffy stuck a booger in Zoro's drink! heyyy, you could have that scene only with Zoro sizing Sanji up as a potential rival before he starts going all gaga over Nami! And then! And then! When he loses his fight to Hawkeye and Luffy nearly goes berserk, you can have Zoro go on this mental tirade about not being strong enough for his captain before he shouts out that promise he made to Luffy! YaY!
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  • From ANON - Oboro on January 18, 2006
    Ha, ha, ha, I really like your fic so far!! It's simultaneously cute and funny, and I can't get enough of it!! You also write from Zoro's POV very well; I can totally picture him thinking those kinds of things ^__^ Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Heaven and Hell on January 15, 2006
    Heaven: YOSH!! Huzzah for ZoroxLuffy fluff!! *bows down to you* you made my day ^^
    Hell: even better *evil grin* some ZoroxLuffy action >) There's just not enough
    ZxL out there, ya know?
    Heaven: *sigh* Yesh. I tuned out any One Piece fanfic for a while because of the lack
    of any -real- good fanfics that caught my intrest. and then
    today I thought I would check and see if there was any-
    Hell: Damn good fiction finally. I guess -WE- *glares at heaven* came on the
    right day 'cause we found your fic. And I -do- say that it is devilishly good *grin*
    Heaven: Keep it up or I'll sick Hell on you! ^_~
    Hell: grrrrrr....
    Heaven: *is thinking about the ZxL kiss in last chap* SQUEEEEE!!!!.....Ya know
    I can't stop wondering if Luffy isn't as 'air-headed' as he leads us to believe. *wink*
    Hell: oohhhh......hmmm......Anywho, love it and can't wait to see more!
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  • From Kugatsu on January 11, 2006
    Hm you've got a good thing here! Great first person voice, great tension and I like how you don't bother with the regular narrative of where they're going or what's happening. Zoro's voice just puts you there.

    Well done.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on January 10, 2006
    please can you continue and be my pimp for zolu ficcie ?
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