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Reviews for Love comes in Unexpected Ways

By : Wannabeanactress
  • From ANON - Jsg on January 12, 2006
    I love your story dont listen to those haters!!! You're a WONDERFUL author =D continue soon
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  • From LunaTheLunatic on January 08, 2006
    ..................YAY Anderson! (he scares meh) Anderson with a attemted rape....ON A FEMALE?!? thats new for me lol! usaly hes trying to get into alucards pants......or visa versa....

    Weee Nice still hard ta read, Oh and thanx for no Cuddle-card. I've read many fanfic that have started out great,just to disapoint me with a Cuddleing and or Weeping Alucard. yuck...

    Keep going! Update update! wee

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  • From Johna on January 08, 2006
    Love the story! Liked the idea that Anderson would try to punish her like that. Hehe. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - SisterErotica on January 08, 2006
    This was a OK fic. I got a little bored with it since there was very little describtion in it and Ceras was very 'Un-Ceras' like. Alucard and Integra got a little out of character too. But I think with practice and some more work that this fic has potential. Don't mind what Anon said. Keep working hard and writing and you'll get better
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  • From ANON - Sirei on January 08, 2006
    Hey there I like your story very much. It's alittle bit confusing just where you want to be going but I hope you make Alucard realize that Seras is the best that could have happening to him.... I am a total Seras/Alucard fan and hope you let him be the mate who seras will be together for the rest of their undead lifes. I also hope you will a little bit of training in this story so that Alucard can see Seras abilitys. I hope you update soon because I can't wait to see how will it go on.
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 07, 2006
    Eheheh, we true critics feel your pain. Defects like Anon make us look bad. See, when you're such a loser that you have to cruise around AFF.net writing completely unhelpful reviews just for the sake of being a n00b, normally you WOULD put an Anon in your critic name. If only I had IP banning power... *sighs dreamfully*

    Anyhoo, here's my review.

    Plenty of potential, oh yes. I feel you could have spread out and built up to Seras' outrage a little. Integra seemed a bit extra bitchy, but not much more than normal, and I'm guessing you were using that in your plot basis anyway right?

    Your Alucard seems spot on. Note though that I wouldn't be saying this if you had made him have those thoughts out loud that he was having near the end. I've seen quite a few writers crash their characters straight OOC the same way, so kudos to you ;P

    Your detail is above average, try to work on that a little more to achieve perfection. "Detail is divine" ~ Any great artist.

    Now, like everybody, (everybody whom counts. (no n00bs)) I will make my plea for you to ignore the n00bs and keep marching forward on this fic. Please-please-please write more, your fic looks soooooo juicy, yes oh yes-yes-yesssss ;P

    Ciao,
    TEOATGAB
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  • From ANON - ed_the_goth_chick on January 06, 2006
    i like this story just its pretty good i love AxS stories not alot out there...i agree with LunatheLunatic try not to make him too cuddly. oh and dont let ANON get to you, why praise then criticize a story? thats kinda retarted but neways keep it up i like it! ^_^ best wishes- ED :D
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  • From ANON - LunaTheLunatic on January 06, 2006
    Eh... Its not all bad i like it..If someone is messing with ya they can fuck themselfs..Ha I've read some REALY bad fanfic...This an't close to it...Its so so..i like it and keep on reading it.....Keep going dear...If my fic got some bad commits i whould just cry and won't wright anymore for the rest of my life! gah! But i like your stuff! YEAH FUCK OFF HA HAHA HAA HAA...oh god now my fic's going ta get bad reviews epps...*weeps*

    Its a ok AxS fic, a nice romance , a little mushy...but i like that for now...its better then the AxS rape fics out there...i'm getting tired of them . Just..don't make Alucard...cuddle...I hate cuddleing Alucards! No more cuddles with the alucard! (After sex cuddles don't count)

    oh god i'm ranting forgive..not in the right mind now...GOOD FANFIC MORE MORE
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  • From ANON - Razielum on January 06, 2006
    Hey there. Just to say that your story has a good start and as for that ANON think, they can shut their trap. Writing isn't bloody easy and I think that you do have a talent!! I think that you have the potential to write a story that will have people hooked and be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. I know I will. Keep up the good work. And don't keep me waiting for another chapter, because that is just mean. Lotsa possitivness, Razielum. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Vicious on January 06, 2006
    I do not think you should delete your story. I do believe that it could benefit from being formatted a bit differently, it's hard to read without paragraphs, otherwise I feel you should keep at it and only listen to contstructive critizism and those who enjoy your work. Genuine advice should be welcome, but flames are definitely not worth your time.
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  • From ANON - Mirado on January 05, 2006
    Ignore that Anon, the story is good please continue.
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  • From ANON - SymphonyofDarkness on January 05, 2006
    Hmmm, this has great potential it just needs a little work. Such as word usage, and just a little more detail. But other then that I really liked it, and enjoyed reading it. I also read your Inuyasha fic and loved that one as well. Please up-date this one soon.
    ~Symphony~
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  • From ANON - bricklyn on January 05, 2006
    i understand what you mean i myself is writting a story i have moments like that if you need any help just reply to this in your next chapter i will conact you
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    ugh this is a horrible piece of crap. you're terribly untalented. get a beta. better yet, GET SOME TALENT.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    that waz pretty good keep it up and up date soon
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