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Reviews for Ships in the Night

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2015
    That was one of the most beutiful stories i have read i acualy shed a tear when tsuruko and keitaro died and i loved the idea of motoko seein both of them as they were when they were younger holding hands very star wars lol i hope that u do more stories of keitaro and tsuruko there are not enough. Keep up the fanfastic work
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  • From Dansama92 on February 03, 2013
    This story was so beautiful! ^_^
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  • From ANON - dani on August 19, 2011
    Wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Isaac2pointO on July 10, 2009
    I really must say, your skill at writing is amazing, I've been on this site for maybe, 2 and a half years? I've read alot of fanfiction and I won't say yours is the best in any one attribute, you seem more like a jack of all trades master of none. Your ability to introduce characters that I haven't seen or known about in the manga's your stories are based on is better than most everyone elses I have read though. They show alot of emotion that many people try to capture but they don't quite nail it as well as you do and your lemons are quite nice. Ah, here I am saying you aren't a master in any one area and I'm babbling about how much better you DO seem to do in each area lol. Anyways, I loved this story, never could imagine Tsuruko and Keitaro getting together but you made it not only believable, but great. They really seemed to fit together really well, and the epilogue was really nice to, it closed the sotry well. All in all, like all your other Love Hina fics 5/5 awsome
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  • From ANON - asgeee on May 28, 2009
    As a male, I don't admit this freely, but your story actually made me cry.

    You are quite the writer, and you made this story really come to life in a way I haven't experienced from anything related to love hina; not the manga, the anime, and certainly not the other fanfiction crap we all see.

    Well done.
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  • From ShadowFlash on December 07, 2008
    love the story. its one of the best story I have ever readed. Keitaro/Tsuruko pairing is my favorite too. just sad there so few of them. please make more storys of Keitaro/Tsuruko.
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  • From darthme1011 on October 15, 2008
    very heart warming story but also touching
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  • From juanjoseso on April 13, 2008
    that was nice start man the sex was hot
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  • From Killerman83ca on October 08, 2007
    I have read your story. When Keitaro was left I was over come with tears. when he was about to leave the second time it happen again. and the lat time is when you reached the end of the story. which made me smiled and cry at the same time. I would like to know if you are going to do another story about the.
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  • From ANON - Brian on April 08, 2007
    I had the chance to look at the other reviews after posting my first. I have to say that I agree with all of them. Had I the skill you have with storytelling, I would not be working in the field I am now. I will be keeping an eye out for any further works of yours.
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  • From ANON - Brian on April 08, 2007
    Excellent! I have enjoyed your work. I hope that you will be able to get past your block on the Aftemath story, unfinnished stories always nag at me. But i understand how it is to have ideas stop in their tracks. Until then, thank you for your efforts.
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  • From ANON - chris on April 03, 2007
    bueatiful. the best written work ive read in a long while. congrats!! too bad there wasnt a sequel, this one made my fav list. keep up the good work!
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  • From chibinari on January 17, 2007
    i actually cried reading this fic..heh you capture the story so well that i couldn't stop reading..well,i usually just skipped the unhappy part and move on to the happy one but this time i couldn't help but read all of them..i actually sympathized him and feel his sadness and hurt..i'm glad that i have a chance to read such a great fic..well i wouldn't even read this fic if i hadn't watch love hina..i'm also glad that i picked up the dvd when i can last week..keep at it..
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  • From ANON - thsunami on January 12, 2007
    i have never reviewed any adult fanfiction because simply most of it is just written porn with little to no class. But this truley was a great work of fiction the complexity and maddness of many of the chracters came through with a new and far more realistic setting while at the same time keeping the chracters them selves truley express how they act.


    The lack of a marriage cermoney in itself makes it even more realistic not to mention a women of such strenght and mental disapline would need a man like keitaro that gives even a more belivable base rather then other fanfiction writers have twist and turn the one chracter or another to become completly different to make a pairing of there chossing work.

    I remember lending my freinds the series so they could see it only to tell me that naru should never have had keitaro and to be honest i also felt that way because simply the girl seems to have deep seated trauma about beeing betrayed or dumped that to be frank only a man with keitaros infinte patience could tolorate the women is a complete fool and lucky beyond reason. I also find it funny that motoko herself was in love with him in all truth she was the frist just her foolish fear of men distroyed her chance because she realisded she loved him when he alreadly loved naru and that man is as faithful as the grave, also nice touch about him dying soon after her death it truley felt like him doing somthing like that not to mention the man was virtually indestructable the only way i saw him dying was somthing like that happinging hell if she become immortal i imagene that gene that made only break a bone after the 2 years of intense abuse would fine a way to live on.



    truely a beautiful work of erotica and love, even the sex scenes where done in a true sense of sensual poetry showing what making lve truely is the ultimate expresion of ones emtions for another
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  • From ANON - thsunami on January 12, 2007
    i ha
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