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Reviews for When Angels Fall

By : xtaleenmethane
  • From BattleAngel on March 10, 2008
    Hi, it's me again... uh....

    In the point 7, I really mean point 9.

    And, about the bitchier thing… I was just kidding… I mean no harm… my jokes are like dead horses.

    And… you too grasped a part of my very soul with this work… I just want to say it.

    ¡Hasta luego!

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  • From BattleAngel on March 10, 2008
    Hi! My tag line is “I just speak Spanish, I don’t speak English very well, so please, forgive my misspells”

    This is the second time that I read this story. The first time was like 1 or 2 years ago. And I don’t remember why I didn’t review it.

    Ah, I remember. But I have a lotta excuses!!

    BECAUSE…
    *I was thinking for a “happy ending”
    *I was naïve and stupid…
    *my English was worst before (worst than this? Naaahh)
    *I didn’t know who was Sendoh. (I started to buy the manga 2 months ago, and NOW I KNOW, oh, daddy, but before that, the only ones that I knew were Rukawa and Hanamichi)
    *I lost track of the fic
    *I didn’t had an internet connection

    But… It doesn’t matter now. The saddest thing is, why no one has given you a review, apart from me? Why this little pearl is so alone in the vast sea?

    I’m sorry, but I fell that your story is treated like your Kaede… maybe the people see it, use it and discard it with no second thoughts… Hey, in fact, your is story IS Kaede!! They both are the same thing!! And… yeah, you really are Keisuke!! And… maybe I’m just another anonymous customer, and I’m paying with this. And I know the payment is not enough, because I received so much…

    This story is real, bitter, sweaty, lonely, harsh, pure, painful, and then you clean it and give it a make up and throw it on the street, and yet it look sooo beautiful in it’s misery… I can’t deny that this story touched my heart and my brain and my guts!!! It hit me!!!

    And Sendoh… now that I identify his face and body… aahhh… he’s the perfect match for Kaede. No one else, no other could be. Sendoh with those eyes… All the fault is for Inoue… Why he draws them so beautiful, so erotic, so graceful, so powerful, so intoxicating, so obscene??? YEAH, OBSCENE!!! He breaks our façade of morality and speaks directly to our primal instincts!! Yes, that’s what he does!!! I’m sorry but I never saw the NBA players the way I saw Kaede and Sendoh play basquetball… and I must thank Inoue for the banquet… and you for the bittersweet dessert.

    Q&A:
    3. It doesn’t matter. I think all the story is perfectly understandable. (¡ha ha ha! I don’t know if “perfectly understandable” is written in the correct way, isn’t it?) We don’t need to see if really there were a city 3KM north of Kanagawa… we can feel it.

    5. You DON’T SUCK in storytelling, never say that again. You’re one of the best, one of the finest story tellers that I ever read. If you suck, then I suck in reading… and lady… I don’t suck in reading. WINK!

    6. Yes, I agree with that!!

    7. Well, I’m IN LOVE WITH YOUR SENDOH!!! BUAAAAHHAAAAA!! I’M CRYING FOR YOUR SENDOH!!!!! It hurts me, it really hurts me that Kaede hurts him, and with that, hurts himself. What a finest Oneguin!Rukawa and Tatiana!Sendoh characters you developed… (I’m sorry for the ! thing… I really like it when I saw it in some forums… it goes like Goth!Clark, or Peep!Lana, or Flannel!Clark, ha ha ha ha!)
    I’m not sure if you had read “Oneguin” (I don’t, but I saw the movie =P), but I think you have grasped a part of the very soul of that story.

    13. The discover!! The confession!! The travel!! The foreplay!! The HOT-SEX!! (I need fresh air) The afterwards!! The PostCoital!Sendoh!! ¡HA HAH AH AHA! (I know, I apologize, I’m sooo cheesy, so useless with my writting). All the Sendoh thoughts after the sex, they’re just pure gold. The Lighthouse Climb… The shame and emptiness… the fallen… You want me to cry out, don’t you?

    14.
    * Why do they adore him? Don’t they know that underneath the beautiful gift wrap was a dirty and disgusting surprise?
    * “This is Wonderland my good man, but not everything in it is as nice and forgiving.”
    * “You’re my customer and I’m your whore.”
    * “I’m hollow, Sendoh. This is a shell,” Rukawa said, pointing to himself. “I could remember one businessman comparing me to a porcelain doll. I was pretty to look at and was good for displaying and showing but that’s it. I’m a useless piece of eye candy. Hold me the wrong way, and I will slip. I will break and all that’s left of me will be swept away and thrown into the trash.”
    * -“Is that all you see yourself as? A plaything?”
    -“Once a transaction and an agreement has been made, I can be anything you want me to be.”
    * Seriously. If you want to fly, Rukawa can make you fly with a mere flick of his tongue.
    * "I’ll make it good for you, Sendoh. I promise..." (you made it good for all of us, Kaede)
    * He then sat down, his back against the cushions where his companion lay. “That was meaningless, wasn’t it? Did you think I was your savior? Of course you wouldn’t. You knew all too well that it would end up like this. I sweat to God, I didn’t have this in mind when I offered to pay for your time. Why’d you do something as stupid as that, Rukawa? Why? Did you think that by justifying your need for pain, you’ll be able to keep yourself sane?” Sendoh pulled up his knees against his chest and rested his head there. “Did you know that by dirtying yourself in front of me, you made me dirty as well? Don’t worry. I am as guilty as you’ll ever be.”
    * “Pretty little things that come at a cheap price do not fare very well with time and misuse”

    15. Same answer of 3. You bought us, lady, you don’t need to explain.

    17. No it wasn’t supposed to be funny!! It supposed to be practical.

    18. I don’t think you’re a bitch. A little bitchier maybe…

    “Tell me if you’d like me to continue this story and I’ll consider prolonging this arc.”
    This story is so fine like this… but… but… please… We all need redemption… THOSE BOYS DESERVE REDEMPTION… But maybe not everyone can get it…
    Do as you wish.
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