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Reviews for A Learning Experience

By : DHaugsby
  • From Bloodysyren on November 01, 2008
    You are amazing! Did you know that? AMAZING!!! There, I said it, are you happy!? But seriously, you are the e-heh....you are a GOD among writers. My words pale when presented next to the imagery and emotions that you are able to convey. Incredible work!
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  • From orvida on July 28, 2008
    I reviewed this on lj and i must say i just had to do so again. I'm strange like that,
    Anyway i forgot one small tidbit last time, sanzo looking at the same book that hakkai and goyjo used to introduced them to the joys of man sex. Anyway i just love these stories so much smexing going on i can't get enough. (Now i'm just waiting for the next chapter of Heart of a Monkey King to go up.^___~)
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on July 28, 2008
    I love this fic! Thanks for finishing it. I always really enjoy your work, particularly because the writing style and characterization are so very good. That and of course they are incredibly HOT!
    Thanks again. Any chance of a sequel featuring SanzoxGoku? XD
    Ronnie. :D
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on November 29, 2006
    That scene in Ch. 2 where Hakkai comes on Gojyo is just fucking hot. A lot of writers don't appreciate the wide variety of sexual acts the human body will find pleasure in.

    Eee! A blushing giggling Hakkai! How cute! Lovely job with the inexperienced blow job.

    That quit talk in the moonlight is just beautifully written.

    This is awesome, I can't wait to read the last chapter.
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on September 08, 2006
    Love this chapter. The hostage idea was a hoot. I can just see Hakkai doing all the things you said. Very cute.
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  • From ANON - cupnjava on August 18, 2006
    This is really good and VERY hot! I LOVE the creativity here. Two bits of suggestion. 1) Pay a little closer attention to pronoun confusion. You have a few places where it was a bit difficult to follow. 2) Don't be afraid to use the word "cock" or "dick". I understand the reluctance in Hakkai narrative, but there were several times where the lemon would have read better if you wouldn't have used "sex, "rod" or "sausage". All in all this is EXCELLENT. You convey emotion VERY well and I'm really enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - jarm on August 14, 2006
    This is way to cute!
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  • From JulieDoc on June 10, 2006
    This is very, very hot. Hotter than most Hakkai/Gojyo fic I've read, and believe me, I've read quite a lot. I read the first chapter you posted a while ago, but haven't gotten around to the rest until now. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'd also like to thank you for your review of "Starvation". It's always very nice when one of the better authors in the fandom compliments your work.
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  • From ANON - Crimson on January 31, 2006
    This is wonderful. There hasn't been much good Saiyuki fiction here in a while, and this is just beautifully done. Can't wait to see how things continue to progress.
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  • From ANON - ko-chan on January 22, 2006
    Mm, I loved it! As so many people have said before, those two are perfect for each other. You're writing is quite good...except I would have used the term "semen" rather than "sperm" in the second chapter.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on January 21, 2006
    You have not disapointed me. This wasw a really good chapter. Please continue. I am enjoying this very much.
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  • From ANON - daisey on January 21, 2006
    I just have to tell you what a delightful story this is... and ~so~ utterly hot! keep up the wonderful work, and I'll keep watching for the next chapter... as patiently as I can. ;D
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