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Reviews for The Bits and Pieces

By : Quirk
  • From ANON - Saiyury on January 12, 2008
    I don't know what you’re on about. Goku seemed pretty in character to me and I have no idea how much more refine you could be. The only complaint that I have was that it was too short. And this chapter definitely explained why it was Goku was naked in Gojyo's bed, properly, because at first glace it didn't really make sense but, reading this, it was quiet logical now.

    And it’s just like Goku to see who’s in love with who; however when it comes down to himself he seems completely clueless.

    I’m glad to see you still writing, I was afraid that for a moment you had discontinued “teaching Goku”.
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  • From ANON - starlight_dragon on March 19, 2007
    I really like this story. When will there be more?
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  • From ANON - Blahsblah2001 on February 11, 2006
    I love this story... I had a similiar idea, but with less sex. I might still write it, but probably not.
    I think it would be awful for Sanzo, though, knowing that even though he wants Goku, Goku's with GOJYO of all people... that would really suck for him.
    One mistake, though, Sanzo doesn't smoke Winstons, he smokes Marlboros. It's awful that I just know that off the top of my head....
    _melissa
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on February 06, 2006
    Not as good as the orginal but then it's not really a story right? Hehe still really love it though and hope you do one of these for everything chapter of Teaching Goku. I like having the different persepectives and I'm glad I'm finally getting some Hakkai. Er....I mean I wish I was getting some of Hakkai *heh heh* but I love that I'm finding out what and how he thinks! Please keep this up!!
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on February 01, 2006
    I liked it. But Hakkai's thoughts were a little confusing. I do believe he has the most mental problems out of the whole group but it's hard for me to imagine his thoughts like that,plus I had no clue what the little voice was talking about. I sort of understood but for the most part I felt a little lost which prevented me from fully enjoying the other things that happened in the story. I still loved it though. If you write more I will most certainly read it.
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  • From ANON - Dragyn Phyre on January 27, 2006
    You evil evil person. -.- And you wonderful WONDERFUL person :D one the one hand, now I have ANOTHER fic to check up on, but on the other....it's yours, AND it's part of Teaching...you're evil, and I love you:) The way you wrote Hakkai is just...wow. I like it. a LOT.

    ~Angel
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  • From ANON - lady_kail on January 26, 2006
    Another tantalising slice of the other point of view! I look forward to many more such "Bits and Pieces"
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on January 26, 2006
    Brilliant!!!!!! What an idea to go at it for the other characters pov. I love this. I loved teaching Goku and this is so interesting and will really be good I am sure. You write a very good story and carry the ideas so well. Can't wait until next chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - KaosD on January 26, 2006
    I can't say I agree with your interpretation of the characters, but it'd be interesting to watch what you make of it nevertheless =) [Nevermind me. I don't think Hakkai to be a difficult character either^^]
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 25, 2006
    heh. that was damned entertaining. i absolutely love seeing the chapters like this. now excues me while i got and read the second chapter of TG again. ^__^
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  • From ANON - krimson on January 25, 2006
    Not hard to follow at all, funny and poignant at the same time. Makes me sad for all of them, although sadder for Sanzo and Hakkai, as they mistakenly stumbled away from the ones they really want, who found one another and are content with it. That's gotta sting.
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