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Reviews for A Lesson To Be Learned

By : ShadowofLight
  • From ANON - Firestorm on June 01, 2006
    I remember seeing this fic a while ago, but I never read it all the way through. Interesting take on Seiji. I would have never imagined him to be so forceful and daring. I'm also surprised how Yami would want to teach him a lesson in concern for the other Troopers. I enjoyed this first chapter. It provided an excellent scenary and a good plot.

    The only things that bothered me were how you seemed to mix up both present tense and past tense. It's almost as if you were telling the story from a narrator's point of view. So that part was confusing. I also noticed some words that didn't need to be in certain sentences, and a few typos. But other than that, I enjoyed the chapter very much.
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  • From ANON - Jessy on April 27, 2006
    I don't know if they'd forgive him... that's a pretty serious thing he did. I doubt they could. Ryo would probably be pretty much dead to the world, his friends are all he has to be betrayed like that it would physically kill him. Cye would loose much of his care freeness and would probably get slightly cold. Rowen would probably try and figure out a reason WHY, he'd probably go as far as trying to talk to Sage. Kento would try and kill hiim until Sage actally raped him when that happened he'd probably get either seriously voilent with everyone or meek. None of them would be able to handle it as well as they did. And when Sage realized REALLY what he had done, he's very honnor bound he would have done more than just 'ask' forgiveness, he would have tried to find a way to make it right. Action speek louder than words. if they denied him he'd probrably commet sucide.
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