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By : 3Jane
  • From Qwindylin on January 16, 2007
    that was one of the best fanfics ive read :D the first thing i did after reading was to see if youve done any other fanfics! you have real promise!
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  • From ANON - Carol on January 02, 2007
    This story is the best SC fic i have ever read.

    Unfortunetly, I find Mugen's actions very contradictory to the character you built him on in the previous chapters. I suppose the point you're trying to make in the end is that he's CLEARLY a non-commital person? would NEVER be 'settlin-down' type-a-guy with the one he truly felt for? Worse yet, he'd eventually stop pursuing the one he desires most? Cuz he loved her too much? Or what? I'm kind of confused here. Maybe cuz I got a bit groggy after an all-nighter with this.. around the 28th chapter. Care you explain for me? ^-^ :]

    At first I was livid at Jin/Fuu- but then I realized that was because of Mugen's pure BAKA-ness. What a total and COMPLETE asswipe! I've lost respect for him in here, I have to say. In all honesty, a huge dissappointment for me esp. after the development he went through earlier... *soweee..*

    And now, I hate, HATE Yatsuha. Fuckin' whore. Just... her and Mugen.. after everything... UGH! Bakas, the lot of them. Don't think I can look at them the same way again. Yep, this is the impact your story's got on me. Meh.




    So I kinda lost the nerve to FULLY delve into the last couple chapters of your masterpeice, in all its full detail and glory. I jus' skimmed it due to heartbreak that lasted... half an hour+, I'd say. (I been up all night at this, ya know - It's now 9am, LOL) I suppose I'll get over it sometime and then worship the last few chapters to bits.


    I will say this with the FIERCE ball of PASSION that coils inside me: BEST friggin SC story I've ever read. PERIOD.
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on January 01, 2007
    I have enjoyed this story so much. I'm both sad and glad that you have finished it: glad with the way you ended it, but sad that there is no more to read. The way you have written it, it could be episodes of the anime that we just haven't seen yet. You brought me to tears when it looked as if Jin was really dead this time, but I'm happy that you ended it the way you did. This is a beautiful piece of writing, from start to finish.
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  • From ANON - ktbird on November 23, 2006
    I stumbled across Nenju yesterday, and just finished it. I am in complete awe of your writing skills, as this is the best Samurai Champloo fanfiction I have come across, and one of the best pieces of fanfiction overall that I have ever read. Your tone is fantastic, practically identical to how the characters are portrayed in the anime. I was drawn in and was engaged in the plot; so much so I could not wait to continue reading and see what would happen next. This is fantastically written, and I thank you for sharing it with us. I would love to know if you have written more Samurai Champloo fanfiction, and if so, where I could find it, as I would enjoy reading more or your fiction very much. Thank you again!

    Katie
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2006
    Jin is pussywhipped throughout this entire story and then you go and castrate him at the end. Why am I not surprised?
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  • From maderine on November 21, 2006
    Oh, God, Jin's hands! That's awful! I have to say I'm glad he's not dead, though. That was a hell of a closer. It actually made me tear up which never, never happens.
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on November 21, 2006
    Brava! What a wonderfull finish to Nenju, I have to admit it was a turbulent ride filled with tears and smiles but I'm very happy with the ending. I love that you gave Mugen a passel of daughters that was so cute. Your ending was real and heartfelt and I deeply enjoyed your story.
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  • From ANON - SASSIELASSIE on November 21, 2006
    COOL, BUT I SKIPPED THE LEMON, HEHE. CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER - NOW I HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING ELSE TO READ...THERE AREN'T ANY GOOD FUUGEN WRITERS ON HERE...WELL...OK, SO THERE are, BUT THEY DON'T UPDATE LIKE YOU DO. SOB, THIS SUCKS...LOL AS SOON AS YATSUHA AND FUU TALKED IN THE LAST CHAPTER, I WAS LIKE, DAMN, YOU KNOW SHE'S GOING TO SINK MUGEN, ESP. WITH THE KID. MEN ARE GULLIBLE THAT WAY, HEHE. I WASN'T SURPRISED WHEN JIN CAME BACK, SO THE ENDING WAS KINDA ANTICLIMATIC, BUT IT WAS STILL VERY GOOD...I TEND TO LIKE THE MORBID/SAD ENDINGS BECAUSE THEY'RE MORE BELIEVABLE, YA KNOW? :) AND...THEY MAKE ME CRY AND CURSE THE AUTHOR/AUTHORESS FOR BEING SO MEAN TO THE POOR CHARACTERS, BUT THOSE ARE THE KINDA STORIES THAT STAY IN MY MIND. THIS WILL PROBABLY STILL BE ONE OF THEM, THOUGH, BECAUSE YOUR STORY MADE ME FEEL SO MANY EMOTIONS - MOST OF THEM WERE NOT VERY NICE, BECAUSE I HATE GETTING ANGSTY CLIFFHANGERS, HAHA - THEY MAKE MY HEART HURT. ^^ I'M SUCH A BABY. HOPE YOU WRITE MORE IN THE FUTURE, AND MAYBE NEXT TIME AROUND SHE'LL CHOOSE MUGEN. XD HEHE
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  • From ANON - Silent_Aura on November 21, 2006
    Although it didn't turn out how I wanted it to, it was still gorgeously written and for that I commend you. :) I knew Jin would come back, because c'mon, one more chapter...I seriously doubted you'd end it with everyone mourning and bawling, but who knows? ^^; The only thing I wasn't expecting was Mugen having more than one kid...wow. LoL
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  • From ANON - SASSIELASSIE11988 on November 15, 2006
    YOU ROCK SO HARD, BUT IN A SADISTIC SORT OF WAY BECAUSE I'M SURE YOU WANT US TO CRY. LOL XD I AIN'T CAVIN' IN...I REFUSE! I MAY GET ALL TEARY-EYED NOWADAYS, AND SOMETHIN TELLS ME THAT THIS NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE EMOTIONAL, SO I HOPE YOU LET ME DOWN EASY. ^^ HEEHEE PRETTY DESCRIPTIONS AND WHATNOT...BIG SURPRISE THAT THE NINJA-WHORE'S (HA...IT'S ONE WORD WHEN HYPHONATED! XD) PREGNANT (not). I ALWAYS WONDERED WHAT THEY DID BACK THEN ABOUT PROTECTION...PERHAPS ABSTINENCE ACTUALLY was THE ANSWER, HAHA. KEEP GOIN! :0D
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on November 15, 2006
    Aww, that was cute. I liked how Mugen went out of his way just to bring Fuu the loom with the hopes that she'd be interested in something new. I can't help but feel that it will serve a different purpose... And now that Yatsuha's there I'm surprised how willing Fuu was to make friends with her considering their history, but I suppose her love for Jin made her forget. And since there's one chapter left, Mugen definitely won't get Fuu, and...uh...I don't know. Seems like someone might die. =-/
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  • From ANON - Silent_Aura on November 15, 2006
    Oy, so very sad. :( Thankfully I was still awake when you posted because of our damn regestering for spring classes, so yeah...bah. -_- As soon as Yatsuha stepped off the ship I was like...SHIT! And then when she said she was pregnant, I went DOUBLE SHIT! lol Gosh, it really doesn't sound like it'll be the end in just one more chapter...it's insane. =-/
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  • From maderine on November 15, 2006
    Woman, if you end the story with Jin dead, I will have to kill you.

    Seriously, though, I love this story. I think I might have reviewed it on FF.Net. I know it's on my favourites list there. As far as I'm concerned, this is, hands down, the best "Samurai Champloo" fic on the net. Everyone is wonderfully in character - yes, even Fuu who has understandably become a lot harder and less innocent after everything she's been through. The story is really original and follows naturally from the series without being just the same ol', same ol'. It's just brilliant, really.
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  • From ANON - Chi on November 12, 2006
    My guess is Jin comes back, cuz that's what always happens. lol Good story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jillian on November 10, 2006
    It's really awesome, but I kinda hope you don't bring Jin back to life. Not because I don't like him, but because it's cliche' and way overdone. Everyone ALWAYS excepts them to come back, and it's just.....unrealistic. Now you've captured everything so beautifully up til now, so I'm sure you'll find a way to make it work. ;-)
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