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Reviews for An Unexpected Coupling

By : blood-and-lust-87
  • From Safir84 on December 15, 2007
    Another great story of yours which I really liked! The plot was good and so were the portrayal of the characters, good job! The story was also very well written and I thought that both endings were good, although I must say I enjoyed the second one more, hehe!

    All in all awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Gwen on December 22, 2006
    Gooood Morning! I was half a sleep until I read this. More Please! What a way to wake up!
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on November 07, 2006
    I LOVE THE ENDING!

    i mean sure i'm a fan of happy endings but it just wouldnt suite the story or the couple.....

    its fantastic! i loved it!
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  • From ANON - Lilac Paradox on November 01, 2006
    Now THAT'S how I like to see my man depicted! Raw, cruel, yet with a tender side that's there, yet hardly distinguishable. Very, VERY nice! I think that you've captured Mugen and Fuu's relationship to a "T", and...well...I love it! Nice nice job! :) *Yep, I clearly left my thesaurus at home while reading this -_-'*
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha's2hotmiko on October 31, 2006
    man that was good! I wish mugen and fuu can be happy. i wonder if they both died what will jin do? well that's another story in itself...so give me credit! lol
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  • From ANON - aniprincess13 on October 30, 2006
    THAT'S SO SAD! I thought I was gonna cry when I read that.. Yes.. ye did fooled me.. And i LOVE it! Am still in shock though...
    AH! FUU! WAH!

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  • From ANON - hydras15 on October 30, 2006
    OMG! I knew it! I KNEW IT! I knew you were going to kill Fuu, I could tell from the second that they stepped onto that ship! *growls* You are a sadist like me! You like to put your characters through hell! *starts sobbing* Mugen! Poor Mugen! I loved this chapter! It was so great, so dark, so awesome! And I personally think he was in perfect character, he'd never say I love you, that's just not Mugen, and I don't think that he'd cry... that much... so you did a very good job! Great as all ways! I wonder what's going to be in the next chapter? I'm sad now... But oh so happy! You nearly made me cry.

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  • From ANON - Mary Sue on October 30, 2006
    Holy crap this is crazy good!!~_^ Really hot and very smart all at the same time!

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  • From ANON - CuriousRiz on October 30, 2006
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    ..*whispers* "I knew it"

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    ...... all I'm able to say at the moment is ..update soon... */_*

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    ~~~~ ]> see of tears ... "For The Dearly Departed"
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  • From blood-and-lust-87 on October 29, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_O That was SO sad!! -runs off crying-
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  • From ANON - Caesar on October 29, 2006
    you...how....DARE you....;___;

    I'd say I hate you...but you look nothing like my 3rd grade teacher so I'll justs tick to saying that...I really don't like you right now.... my poor little Fuu...... poooooor Mugen........

    Excuse me while I go whimper aimlessly in a corner.

    Well done.

    Now go write the next chapter so i can have some closure.
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  • From ANON - Aresy on October 28, 2006
    Awwww...he finally understand that he likes/ even loves her and she is the one to go. :( I wasn't expecting this. Good writing.
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  • From ANON - CuriousRiz on October 26, 2006
    Oye,OYE!! The Chapter was cut off, the chapter was cut off!! Fix it quick!

    -- “You ok?” the blonde questioned, her concern only mounting in its intensity as her friend feebly shrugged her shoulders. “Fuu, -- *cries* Please, fix it!!
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  • From ANON - Caesar on October 25, 2006
    Thanks for the update..... do it again soon......
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  • From ANON - Mitzi on October 18, 2006
    Wow...that was very beautiful and heart-wrenching. I ADORED the scene where Fuu begged Mugen to live for her. It was SO sweet. I also liked how Mugen told her to stay away from him since she could end up getting the disease, too. I also love how Mugen's STILL a hard-ass this far in the story since most authors make him get wimpy when he falls for Fuu, which you haven't done at ALL so far. That's saying a lot, you must realize. I wanted to cry during Kohza's letter (yes, I'm a baby, I know), because it showed her secret motives and made her seem like a really sweet and selfless character. You also filled it in so that these events could've actually transpired on the show, thus making it neat to think that this might have been Kohza's ulterior motive. Loving it! Please update soon!!
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