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By : deathflame
  • From 1loveforall on September 02, 2008
    Oh the plot thickens. So why is Tomah uping the anti? Can't wait to find out. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Crmy on January 13, 2007
    Hello,

    I'm just going to start of with saying, I refuse to finish reading this. Although I know everyone makes mistakes, if a writer expects reviews and praise, then they need to work for it. You need to either proof read your chapters and fix spelling and grammical error, or get yourself a beta. I pray to God you at least know what that is.

    Also, this was too rushed. It was confusing and unclear, which is a shame becuase there's nothing wrong with the plot just the details, or lack there of. Don't be afraid to detail things and give them depth. After I finished with the last chapter, my mouth felt literally dry. Your portrayel of the characters was terrible.

    Go back, rewrite the story or get a beta to fix the what you ahve so far, and your up coming one. A badly written story keeps the readers at bay and the reviewers away.

    You'll be surprised at the differance in the number of readers/reviews.

    Cheers
    Crmy
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  • From ANON - Kasey on December 31, 2006
    Does he go? Come on you cant do this to meeeee!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on July 05, 2006
    This is interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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  • From KimikoChan on May 16, 2006
    Wow I like this story! Its really good, cant wait to see what comes next =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Tagath on May 05, 2006
    that's a cute story... (okay, I may have a strange sense of cuteness...) i'm waiting for more!^^
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