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Reviews for Retreat

By : Scottishfae
  • From butabara on June 19, 2011
    Aw! That was sweet! I like it!
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  • From Darknessdawns on August 21, 2008
    I liked it very much. It was short and sweet. I think u did a wonderful job with Takashi.
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  • From spoon10488 on April 18, 2008
    Lovely story.
    =)
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  • From Hibiskiss on February 19, 2008
    awww sooo cute!
    Hibiskiss want more!
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  • From crazycheryl on June 27, 2007
    I wonder what is truly on the menu? I hope to see more of the test garden soon. I love how the story is written.
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  • From bloodbunny on May 14, 2007
    Yeah! OMG! This chapter was good! I can't wait for the next one to come out!
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  • From ANON - Pirate on April 16, 2007
    You're writing is very enjoyable, and this is my second favorite pairing! I see great potential in this story, even so early on, and I hope to see more of it.
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  • From ANON - Meggie on February 13, 2007
    This fic of yours is anything but R. Very well written, yes. Characters realistic? Of course. But honestly, this does not belong on AFF.net. It's just too...fluffy and pure. Don't get me wrong, your writing style is captivating and I enjoy reading your works, but people come to this site to read smut. And unfortunately...this isn't.

    Your mission, if you choose to accept, is to write a smutty, lemony fic. With Haruhi and any one (or two) of the club members.

    Back to your fic, I think that you captured Mori-kun's essence perfectly. I like how you mentioned his deep laugh and caring disposition. And Hunny's apporval at the end was worth reading. Good job.

    But seriously, this is not R. Maybe K+ at the mention of Mori's non-existent underwear.
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  • From ANON - Syd on October 24, 2006
    Wow, I really love this fic, please continue if you could! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Seloa on August 22, 2006
    ... reviews are a writers wet dream? alright then.

    I liked it. The writing kind of implies that Mori and Haruhi have some kind of relationship outside of the host club. I await more. lol
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  • From ANON - Dria on August 19, 2006
    I've been searching for a good fic with Mori and Haruhi. Please do continue. It would make me quite happy, if that holds any importance ^.^ If possible please email me if you add another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Raven Shaoran on July 12, 2006
    I loved this! ^.^
    I wish there was more!!!
    I wonder what Mori and Haruhi are going to do later... _> XD
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  • From ANON - sky_040 on July 03, 2006
    not fair need more it is wonderful write more. please don't be mean this can go so much farther.
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  • From ANON - gretel_chan on June 01, 2006
    So, personally, I find this fandom terribly difficult to write for. So I am very impressed! You've done an extraordinary job of writing these characters. I never thought of a Mori/Haruhi pairing, but the quiet but charged atmosphere you put into this fic was fantastic for this couple. I hope to see more of your work in this fandom, as I just LOVE Ouron.


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  • From ANON - butterflysuki on May 31, 2006
    YEAH! A HOST CLUB FIC!!! I really wanna write one, and though I prefer a couple other pairings, this one was sweet and well written. Good job!
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