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Reviews for The Demon's Den

By : MrsTsukiyono
  • From RyoToshiba69 on August 01, 2007
    I really like this story line. It's pretty good. But if you would like, I could edit your chapters that I saw needed to be fixed up. ^_^ As for the beta before you post, I think you just have to get someone to beta all your stories and it'll go to them first. But that's just me guessing. >_< Anyways. Good job! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From writerofeirinn on February 13, 2007
    Well, most of the time you just acquire a beta reader as you write your story. Or you post the first chapter and appeal for one. There are websites you can find for beta readers but I have found it hard to find one for slash stories before I have published them. You could always just leave a message like a challenge for one here or do a search. Most fanfiction writers I know though have come across beta readers through friendships through message boards or just through conversations with like-minded people.

    Why are you looking for a beta? I have not noticed anything particularly wrong with the chapters you produce. Actually, Demon's Den is one of the most grammatically correct stories that I am reading at the moment. Neither Ryo or Dee seem to go out of character too much either. Its a story I enjoy reading and look forward to the updates as it is written in a very professional manner.

    What are you wanting beta read?

    Eirinn
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on January 12, 2007
    Mother Lane is a HUNTER! Wow, I didn't see that one coming. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mazy3261 on January 08, 2007
    I really like this story, and I'm glad you're still updating. For some reason, good vamp stories never seem to stay up for very long. Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - The person who really likes your story to little pieces! on December 09, 2006
    >_< ZOMFGUH! I LOVE IT! -does FAKE dance that involves a weird shake thing-y- I knew Puppet Master was from Trinity Blood (yes, he's damn Sexah!) I like Sword Dancer though too, he's just so awesome! Anywhoo, GREAT fic so far (although I hate when Berkie is the bad guy)and I can't wait to read more! Ryo is such a cutie! (and I feel so sorry for him. T^T My poor darling!) >.< I wish Dee would go werewolf on Rose's ass and then still be in love with Ryo and be like one of those "UnderWorld" twists you know? I just want them to be happy! (Fucking JJ, I've always hated him) (Leo's so cool though...) Oops, rambling!
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  • From ANON - A fan on November 29, 2006
    Love your story! please update Asap!
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  • From ANON - kuragari75 on November 15, 2006
    AWWW, are they going to go meet Mother? I love her! good story btw. I'm a littl frightened to find out what JJ has up his sleeve. hmmmm, ANYWAY! can't wait for an update! Later.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on October 10, 2006
    Mmmm Lime ;-)
    Thouse two in the kitchen will be fun.
    But what will happen with the stranger from the last chapter?
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  • From ANON - Demonrights on September 16, 2006
    Oh damn who was watching JJ??? That completely sucks but on the uphand Dee kissed Ryo...twice. Really like this fiction so I hope for an update soon, or whenever you get around to it.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on September 03, 2006
    hey I just noticed your story and I like it a lot. It was nice that you didn't new what exactly was going on at the beginning.
    And who follows them? Rose? J.J.? The werewolf? And why isn't Dee a werewolf? And why does Ryo feel submissiv to Dee? And how will they get rid off Rose?
    You see I need a lot of story!
    Have a nice holiday and enjoy the sun for me too ;-)
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  • From ANON - Raven Black on August 31, 2006
    Love this story. Not enough vampire fics out there. Poor Ryo though. well I can't wait for more. Have fun in Greece!!!
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  • From ANON - sumblink2 on August 14, 2006
    .....OMG!!!! SO GOOD I wanted to cry for Ryo and then congrat him for talking like that to Rose. Oh man I can't wait for the game too! What is Dee planing now for him know that Ryo called him! So excited I can't wait. Update please.
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  • From ANON - TimeFlys on August 10, 2006
    Like always.... WONDERFUL JOB! You really captured the struggle that Ryo was forced to go through while watching Diana and her pray. Making Rose mad was not a good idea on Ryo's part, and now I'm worrried for Dee. Somehow a vampire master vs a human with a little pistal does not seem good odds. Well can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully with a little dee/ryo smut! (just for fun! hint hint) lol
    (Sorry for the double post! I got so excited with writing the review that I forgot type my PenName. lol)

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2006
    Like always.... WONDERFUL JOB! You really captured the struggle that Ryo was forced to go through while watching Diana and her pray. Making Rose mad was not a good idea on Ryo's part, and now I'm worrried for Dee. Somehow a vampire master vs a human with a little pistal does not seem good odds. Well can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully with a little dee/ryo smut! (just for fun! hint hint) lol
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  • From ANON - sumblink2 on July 19, 2006
    Yeah!! You updated!!! I like that you put the story in some oen else's POV It was different-ish, well....iy was cool, PLEASE UPDATE SOON-er,
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