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Reviews for Eden

By : Eiri
  • From chazmy on August 22, 2007
    OMG! no please tell me that you have not quit on this fic. I love it. I was so interested on what is going to happen next and bam no more NOOOOO!

    This fic was perfect. You made my mind complete transfixed on every word and action.

    please update. { begs }
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  • From ANON - Jess on January 05, 2007
    You are too talented. I spent an hour wiping drool off my keyboards. Is it wrong I laugh at Hisoka's misery? Please continue!
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  • From ANON - kiki on November 03, 2006
    *drools all over the keyboard from hotness*
    i definitively praise you on your story X3
    just hope he won't listen too much to hisoka and/or angst somewhere *lol*
    i'll be watching you! XD
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  • From ANON - Yuki Tsukiyo on October 09, 2006
    Though set within the anime, your 'What If' fanfiction flows well with the original story. You portray the characters wonderfully and your style of writing is impeckable. The descriptions within the text are vivid and word use and grammar are lovely. I throughly enjoyed this story, unlike many other Yami No Matsuei fictions that I have ventured to read in the past. Please keep writing.

    -- Yuki Tsukiyo
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on August 27, 2006
    more please i love the story and i hope you will have more chapter please more .
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  • From ANON - Lady_Black_Cat on August 12, 2006
    Holy shite! Another MurxTsu fic! Thank you so much! We need more of this pair!

    Write more please!
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  • From ANON - RabidSqurl on August 09, 2006
    Ooh la la...I am enjoying this very much. ^^
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  • From ANON - lynn on August 09, 2006
    AWWW...poor Tsuzuki. What will he do about Muraki?? MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! Please update SOON. Btw...GREAT STORY!!!
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  • From ANON - quinta essentia on August 02, 2006
    Jollyolly, I love your enthusiasm! I was all smiles reading your review. I highly support your idea of a lemony reunion. *grin* Yes, yes. A brief unwanted parting would make the reunion even sweeter. Muraki letting go for the sake of his partnership/friendship with Hisoka and Tsuzuki being angsty. (It's so hard for me to picture Muraki letting Tsuzuki go for long. I imagine him being so posessive. He has what he wants and I want him to keep it that way! Ha!) Damn Hisoka for being in the way. Oh gosh, I am such a Hisoka hater sometimes! Hahaha! *pause* Oh and a wedding, that would be fun.

    So Eiri... I'm thinking out loud here: maybe you could include some contact with Tatsumi. Maybe he could check in on them, perhaps by phone or something. Then show Hisoka have a hard time telling the 'whole' situation or something. Also Tsuzuki maybe could reflect more on Muraki and thier tryst, all the while coming to a decision on his feelings. *thinking* Maybe Muraki's 'plans' could possibly not go through all the way for some reason or another. *grumbles* And last but not least, more lemon. Heh. Ahh, well hmmm, that all I got so far. A bunch of maybes, alsos and somethings. Kind of Vague? Yeah. Hope it can help a bit, if at all though. Well, looking forward to what you conjure in the next chapters. Loving it so far, needless to say.

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on August 02, 2006
    Thanks, quinta, for the shout out!^^ I'm glad Eiri took my suggestion and ran with it! I wonder how much of a thorn Hisoka will be...not being a Hisoka fan I find myself liking your version of him in that I'm feeling his anger and hurt and Tsuzuki's "betrayal". But, that doesn't prevent me from wanting a happy ending for Muraki and Tsuzuki!

    How about a wedding!!!! Too much??? ^^
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on August 02, 2006
    Wheee! Another review since you posted three chapter, I should post three reviews...Okay, Midnight was touching...Tsuzuki gathering up his things and not wanting to leave...Muraki being happy for those two days...wanting Tsuzuki to stay..yikes, but you write a poignant scene.^^ MORE, PLEEZE!! I wrote that Muraki suggest that he and Tsuzuki part for the sake of Hisoka..a temporary parting as their feelings grow stronger and their yearnings deepen...

    Of course, a lemon should come first before the parting!^^

    Are you posting this story anywhere else? 'Cause other Muraki/Tsuzuki needs to see it!
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  • From ANON - Jollyolly on August 02, 2006
    Oh my gosh! The plot thickens! You're on a roll, it seems. ^^ I'm thrilled that you're continuing this little drama...and I love that Tsuzuki defended Muraki! Yeah, Hisoka has his reasons, but gosh darn it, Muraki and Tsuzuki are GOOD together!^^

    Maybe when Tsuzuki tells of his confrontation with Hisoka to Muraki, Muraki suggests that they shouldn't see each other anymore, much to the doctor's anguish...and Tsuzuki will see the logic in that, but, his heart, too, his breaking! An angsty scene...and then Tsuzuki will realize he can't walk away from Muraki...and then..a lemony REUNION!!

    Well, that's my take on it...^^ Keep writing, pleeeeze, you're doing great!
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  • From ANON - quinta essentia on August 01, 2006
    *sigh* After your previous update, I had checked backed daily. Your startling disappearance had me reeling. Then... BAM!!! I was grinning ear to ear. I am ecstatic that you have returned for an update. And what an update!! Oh yes! *sings* 'These are a few of my favorite things...' Strawberries, whipped cream, chocolate, and MurakixTsuzuki. Hahaha, quite a lovely little tryst. I'm a sucker for romanticism. I totally want for Muraki and Tsuzuki to have a 'happy ending,' whatever that may be. Perhaps, for my own satisfaction and those who may share my sentiment as well. However, Muraki's 'plans' have me worried about there future. Meh, what's a romance like this, between two people such as them, peppered without a little struggle. I'll tell you what. Kinda boring. The struggle keeps me interested and wanting to know more; always looking for the best possible outcome with the given variables. It only makes the end that much more satisfying. (Totally went off on a tangent in the last few sentences. *shakes head* I know.)

    Also, I liked seeing Tsuzuki defending Muraki. Shout out to Jollyolly for suggesting that. I wish I could give some good suggestions too. :smileysadandlackingcreativityforthetimebeing: However, I believe in your ability as a writer. As many fics as I have read, some people never cease to amaze me with there creativity.

    Okay, I realize I just typed alot. Heh, oh well. Can't wait for more. Au revoir!

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Yuki Valons on July 31, 2006
    Wow...three more chapters so soon~ @.@ *glomps you to death* XD Absolutely love you right now! I sense that something bad will happen soon...can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Sueona on July 31, 2006
    Yeah, Tsuzuki for telling Hisoka off. Please let Muraki be with Tsuzuki. The story is great. Update soon. :) :)
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