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Reviews for The New Card(S)

By : Yukyion
  • From Miko_Ryugon on June 14, 2012
    please continue i wanna know whats next o.o
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  • From LemonLover on May 10, 2009
    Hi, i got your review about the fact that my story was similar to yours, and i'm sorry. i had never read this until just now, and it's really good, but they are only really similar in the fact that there is a sex card. so, sorry, but they aren't that similar, and i swear i was in no way copying you. Promise! ^^

    -LemonLover-
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  • From ANON - Star-Chan on August 03, 2008
    Great story and plot but I dont think its possible for a girl to cum that many times in one setting. I added you to my faves and I can't wait for moew of the story! Great job!
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  • From ANON - ty on December 28, 2007
    I love this fic I can't believe ur gonna end it
    I think u have a great idea and I really wish u would write more!!!!!
    I hope u update its a great plot!

    Xoxo
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 12, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - snapelicious on September 29, 2006
    I'm gonna come right out and say this... I didn't like it. There's no satisfaction to it. No build. Even if it was from the magic of the cards, she was just, as you put it, "organisming" constantly. Where's the fun in that? Touya just came out of no where and banged her? No build to that, no thought process. Your actual sex scenes (which one would think would be the focus of this sort of fic) were surprisingly vague, yet filthy.

    And it's ORGASM. Unless there's some sort of creature growing in her (hey, that's a whole different story) it's orgasm.
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  • From ANON - Birman on September 28, 2006
    BTW, you misspelled orgasm as "organism" several times. Might wanna do something about that.
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  • From ANON - Birman on September 28, 2006
    Very interesting. A little like this CCS doujin I read somewhere before. Would love to have seen how you would write the bit where Yue "confronts" Sakura about abusing her powers. ;)

    Actually I thought Mizuki AKA the NASTY PAEDOPHILLIC teacher would've gotten to Touya first, the nasty pedo bitch.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 04, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Chichiriskoi on August 29, 2006
    O.O your quiting! Oh but it wasnt that bad! It was really good, but if that's what you choose, you're the author after all.
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  • From ANON - Clertosayu on August 20, 2006
    You did a very good job!Can you make a chapter of Yue/Sakura/Eriol?
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  • From Chichiriskoi on August 19, 2006
    O.O oh wow! Touya/Sakura twist, i didnt expect that...that was very plesurable.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2006
    thats a hella lot of moaning

    other than that its good
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  • From ANON - wow on August 15, 2006
    Great work, interesting story. I can't wait to read more of it! I wanna know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on August 07, 2006
    Story's wicked Hope you update soon luv. One question though is this going to be a Kero/ Tomoyo story?
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