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Reviews for A Pain In The Heart

By : PasuterEnogu
  • From ANON - SemperVenice on March 21, 2009
    I like it so far. The angsty Hakkai and Gojyo stories are so much better than the happy lovey-dovey ones. I really hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - www on April 14, 2008
    it's good! More!!!
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on January 10, 2008
    Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon(this waiting is *killing* me!)^_^
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  • From ANON - finiz on October 06, 2007
    This is really good~! X3 More! More! Yey Hakkai angst! Just make sure you don't get too melodramatic. :)
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  • From ANON - silverwyvern on September 27, 2007
    Awesome story!! Great plot and I dying to find out what happens next.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From SuchACalamity on September 23, 2007
    oooooo, this is a good story

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - marbles on September 23, 2007
    It is a good story with potential and an interesting plot. I would like to read what happens next.

    However, it is littered with mistakes. You must take more care with writing. You appear to be speak-writing where you just write what you 'speak' in your head, this makes it look am amateurish and detracts from a good plot. Read through your work and take care with your word choices as well as brush up on your homophones. Please make this effort if you can.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2007
    Haha, have you just given up or did you update this somewhere else? If you have: Link! Here! Now! XD I really like this story so YO! Where's ma' update? :P
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  • From ANON - Kibethan. on August 28, 2006
    SWEEEETTTT!!! So, um, gojyo/hakkai is my FAVORITE pairing. And a little bit of angst never hurt, right? ^.~
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  • From ANON - VampiregirlED on August 28, 2006
    I am now reviewing to let you know that I'd love to see chapter three and any chapters following. This is something a little different, and I would like very much to see how it turnes out. ^^
    *^Blood, Rain, & Roses^*
    VampiregirlED
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  • From ANON - jarm on August 27, 2006
    It was good but to painful.
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  • From ANON - Korny Kandy on July 21, 2006
    I really like this so far ^^! Please write more and update soon
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  • From ANON - jarm on July 12, 2006
    oh i like this, but please don't be to hard on our hakkai.
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  • From ANON - JulieDoc on July 12, 2006
    Hey, I dig your archive name! Anyway, I just wanted to say that I agree with you about Gojyo and Hakkai being sort of cliched. I think it's brave to take a different direction, and I love the fact that there is going to be some work involved in whatever relationship you are going to come up with. There's plenty of PWP with these two out there, and a little too much fic where they just fall into bed. (Hence, why I changed the one I'm working on.) Your summary doesn't bode well for Hakkai's future in this story and I actually like that. I may sound a little sadistic, but I like my favorite characters being put into very dark situations and am highly anticipating what comes next.

    Cheers and bravo,

    JulieDoc
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  • From Lynallin on July 11, 2006
    I like this!! good job and I hope to see an update!
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