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Reviews for Angelic love

By : ninetyninenails
  • From ShadowRaider on April 21, 2008
    good story, decent pace, and the flow of the plot feels right.
    I do hope you write more stories.
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  • From AtasukeSakiyurai on October 11, 2006
    Thanks for putting a new chapter...you should go read mine now
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  • From ANON - Atasuke Sakiyurai on October 10, 2006
    Dude...I Have to say, you are a very good writer. your work has inspired me to make an evangelion fic. Thank you
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on August 06, 2006
    Hmm, hmm, hmm... Not bad. Some things seemed out of place. Not necessarily out of character though, except for Asuka, can't picture her singing that kissing song. You're probably aware of this by now, but you spelled "Our" as "Are". Another thing that seemed off, I'm pretty sure Rei already knows about her repeated clonings, she knows she's replaceable.
    Also, when you end someone's dialogue to write something like, 'Asuka said' If you plan to have her continue talking after that, you don't need to start a new line. You only need to start a new line when it's a different speaker altogether.
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  • From ANON - darkies on July 29, 2006
    So far I have no complaints, its quite good. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Stillnotwalking on July 24, 2006
    MORE DAMN YOU MORE I MUST HAVE MORRRREEE!!!!
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  • From ANON - CommanderX1125 on July 24, 2006
    Not bad, a little short for my liking but the general feel of it seems alright, as well as the charachters. I do have one or two things though I would like to point out, the first thing would be Misato. She would be merciless in tormenting him more likely than not, with him inviting Rei to dinner, now of course this is merely my own perspective on the general behavior from the series of the Major, but who can really tell what goes on in the minds of characters in an anime eh? The second thing that seemed to bother me would be them not noticing the rainstorm since the sliding glass door is joined with the living and dining rooms, but I can live with it since you said it was dark and so their vision of what is happening outside may of been hindered. Besides those all of that I think you did a pretty good job. Oh yes, and you used the wrong "no" in the second chapter. Anyway you got 5 from me for the story so not too shabby.
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on July 22, 2006
    I really like this story but there is one thing that got me when Shinji and Misato when to the store what were they driving a sprint car because you wrote it as they were driving three hundred miles an hour other than that the story is really good ok and I cann`t wait to read the next chapter
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