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Reviews for Neko

By : artemisgirl
  • From ANON - Fuzziak on December 10, 2006
    The best DN fic I've ever read^O^
    It's just great, I love characters and sex scene is just arousingly great^_^
    Well done^O^!
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  • From ANON - amicablenemesis on December 10, 2006
    Wow!! A well done Death Note Fiction!! Thank you soo much! This was great! I can't wait to get to the later chapters!! Yay! ~^.^~
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  • From ANON - zelly on December 05, 2006
    >w
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  • From ANON - Behold Mad Hatter on November 27, 2006
    Noooo Noooo! the story started so nicely, why did you have to make Raito seme? and it was all well written, and little to non OOCness, so why, oh why does raito have to top? *sulks in the corner* [if you change it I'll love you forever 0.0 meep.]
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2006
    Kya!!! It's so cute!! And full of yumminess!! I thinnk my stomch just melted into fluffy yaoi goop!! This is also the first time I've ever liked any AFF story enough to review, and I read a lot!! I loved the story, thanks so much!!!
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  • From ANON - htr on November 16, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATETHIS GREAT STORY
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  • From ANON - Lol on November 15, 2006
    LLOOOVED IT
    I hope yhis wasnt the last chapter :] please update fast yay
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  • From ANON - elict on November 10, 2006
    this was a very good story. i like how L keeps analyzing everything all through it, that seems very much like him. and the lemon was hot (yum!), and realistic. great job!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami Yumi on November 10, 2006
    I'm feeling ridiculously lazy to log in right now... XP
    That was funny and hot. I had to clamp my hand over my mouth to keep from bursting out laughing at the part where L was telling Raito the crap about Kira being gay and the computer program he'd made for finding the exact percentage of probability.
    And I somehow like L uke, so yeah, nice smut piece.
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  • From ANON - Novaline on October 31, 2006
    OMG this is so good. Please give me more.

    Very good writing and some very nice smex =)
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  • From ANON - Chys on October 21, 2006
    Hm, I like that one. It's paced well, and Humorous too.
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  • From ANON - teacupprincess14 on October 15, 2006
    ah YUM. more soon please!
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  • From ANON - anonymous reader on October 15, 2006
    Well, I'm impressed. I LOVED the lemon. It was absolutely delicious. God, I want more. ;P
    But, yes... Admittedly, I was a bit hesitant to see L as the uke, since it didn't seem appealing... But, you've pulled through with making a wonderful story/lemon about this "reversal of roles." Really, the story is an amazing piece of work. I only noticed the couple of errors in grammar and spelling... Other than those, I found no flaw in your story... As a result, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Keep up the fantastic work. Good luck continuing your fiction.
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  • From ANON - cat on October 05, 2006
    I absolutely ADORE how you went from uke to seme raito--and XDDDDD it's so true, Raito is like the metro-est metro that ever graced the planet.
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  • From ANON - Kyuppo on October 01, 2006
    The first three chapters were highly amusing to me, the second and third making me grin. There were a few points where I had to hold in my laughter. And, I must say, the fourth chapter made me view L and Raito in a different light. [Haha... 'Light'.]

    In other words... 99% of it was very good! 1% of it made me a bit lost with a few spelling errors and a tiny bit of OOCness. Only a tiny tiny bit. Other than that, I marvel at your spectacular vocabulary and your incredible ability to write in L's point of view!
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