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Reviews for Beat the Heat

By : bevin
  • From Florville on July 02, 2012
    This was magnificent. Having it from both perspectives actually added to the story, I hadn't yet read a fic where the author was able to pull that off, so praise to you for that for sure. You kept them both in character, which was great, and the little emotional twist was a thing of beauty. So much love for this, excellent work.
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  • From thedcg on December 31, 2007
    That was so fun! Great sex, an implied plot, even a relationship! Well written and paced, even IN character! (Or as in character as the thought of Oda's fun loving character having sex can be.) Brava!
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  • From ANON - Kriiz on September 28, 2006
    Fab-u-lous story. I loved it, I loved it, I loved it!

    Your writing style is top-notch. I especially loved how when the action started getting heavy, the sentences were rushed and run-on and almost nonsensical. It really put you right there in the mood of the rendezvous. The descriptions were hot, certainly not predictable or hackneyed ("omg he licked her brest tee hee") and you really captured the essence of lovemaking with this one.

    One of the best parts was the second chapter, a completely different perspective on the same act. Brilliance. 10/10
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  • From ANON - karana on August 29, 2006
    Okay. Wow. -PLEASE- write more SanjixNami stories! This story was all sorts of awesome. The way you had the story in Nami and then in Sanji's perspectives was a GREAT idea!
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  • From ANON - Ghost Stories on August 18, 2006
    This is the greatest SanjixNami story ever. EVER. I loved how it was told from two different perspectives and yet nothing was repititious- except at first I thought you'd posted the same chapter twice, it took me a moment to realize it was a different chapter, lol. I seriously loved this. It was way hot, WAY hot, and I actually laughed out loud a few times at Sanji's chapter, like the part where he was panicing that he would have to kill Luffy which would fuck up the portions for dinner. And I totally felt Nami's chapter, since I've been with boys like that, lol! This made my day. I hope you write more later, this series needs more het fanfiction like really badly.
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on August 10, 2006
    Nicely done. Smexy with just the right touch of romantic additives. And I must confess I enjoyed the peek into Sanji's head. Trust a cook to relate sex to cooking. Yours is a name I'll keep in mind when looking for new fanfics to read. Hope to see more from you in the future.
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