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Reviews for Working out the Paradox

By : chayron
  • From ANON - mizu_majutsu on February 08, 2007
    This was an amazing chapter. I really liked the...er...smut part (OF COURSE!!!), and also the part where Wolfram acquired Yuuri's powers. Very touching indeed. Oh and the way you ended this chapter (the swallowing thing)...PRICELESS!!! Love it! Hope you update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - White_Youkai on February 07, 2007
    Gosh! I love this story! It's really great! Please, do not stop and continue. I can't wait till the next chapter! Keep it up!
    P.S. Man tikrai labai patiko si istorija. Negaliu patiketi, kad tu ne is Anglijos. Tavo anglu kalba nuostabi. Noreciau ir as taip puikiai rasyti. Be to, labai malonu kai pamatai ka nors is savo krasto.^_^ Dievinu Kyo Kara Maoh, ir si istorija tikrai nuostabi. Man patinka kaip tu sukurei Wolframo ir Yuuri charakterius. O paskutine scena buvo tikrai iomi. Nesitikejau tokio posukio ir tai dar labiau patrauke mano demesi. Beje, kur dingo greitosios pagalbos masina? Ka padare Shioris? Yay! Man taip smalsu! Prasau, GREICIAU atnauink! IKI! ^_~ Lauksiu!
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  • From ANON - BOE_4eva on February 06, 2007
    BWAH, i reveiwed ff.net as well... but this is the one i read, so ill review here too BWAH
    AWESOME!! YAY!!!
    Im so happy you are updating so freaquently, it puts me to shame!
    And i cant wait for the next instalment!!!
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on February 06, 2007
    wow that sure gives a new meaning to sex hahaha update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - liyasha85 on February 06, 2007
    I love this fic of yours! Can't wait for the next chap and see what Wolf and Yuuri get up to next. Have to say that the way you portrayed Yuuri as a hetero guy into a bi/gay one is great. Have to say that Wolf/Yuuri are one of fave gay couples.
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  • From cocoke5 on February 03, 2007
    wow that was a powerful chapter for them and wolfman swollw and the powers and yuuui help him i love that and ihopethat they are okay ant that they stay togeter. up date soon.
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  • From ANON - the enigma on February 03, 2007
    XD HAHAHA...all cause he swallowed!!
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  • From ANON - Marieka on February 03, 2007
    Yes I'm reviewing again -.-;

    I forgot to mention how much fun it was to see Yuuri become such a nympho.
    I always found the Pringles metaphor for sex so appropo: "Once you pop, you just cant stop!"

    *coughs and looks embarassed* Well, we are all pervs here right?
    Well it's out of my system now.

    Thanks again for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Marieka on February 03, 2007
    Eeep you updated before I got to review the last chapter ... shame on me. YaY Updates!!!

    chap. 18 ~ absolutely loved it! I thought Yuuri may have trouble with things moving along so fast but Wolfram was really aware of him and conciderate. So sweet.

    chap. 19 ~ o.O; ooh noos ... and yes I'm laughing already *snickers* but still that can be pretty scary ... almost loosing the love he just found. You are so evil. *smirks*

    Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to s'more and I'll do my best to keep reviewing.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on February 02, 2007

    Chapter 19


    I'm glad that Wolfram and Yuuri are discovering new things. But I think they need to get that swapping thing worked out.


    More please. :-)


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  • From Enzeru on February 02, 2007
    phweee that was kind of...unexpected, perhaps even random. This fic seemed so uncrazy...like...roar, its hard to explain. I've read some fics where they invent random magics and laws just to enhance plot. I honestly never liked when people did that, it takes more skill to work off of what is given to them just from the story. And, while you used an OC, you managed to make him believable in the story. There is an exception to the 'random magic' thing, which is the author takes time to explain fully why this rule is part of their society and also makes it believable to the story. It's up to what you think, but arbitrary magic is usually used as a means for an excuse of addition of drama. I'm waiting in eager anticipation to see how you explain this strange new magic of the Mazoku. Other than that, another awesome chapter that made me extremely happy to read!! ^_^
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  • From SorceressFujin on February 02, 2007
    Excellent chapter!! I love how you twisted that towards the end, definatly something new! Fantastic chapter, as always!
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  • From ANON - mizu_majutsu on January 31, 2007
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! This was one...hot...chapter!!! I almost self-combust after reading over the material. :) Amazing work, yet again! I do hope you update real soon! :)
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  • From LucyMay on January 31, 2007
    Hey! I'm reviewing over here now (obviously). I don't like my stories censored, no siree.
    I was just watching the latest English release of the anime, and went online for my fic fix, and was ever so delighted to see one of my favorite stories had a new chapter. A very hot, very good chapter at that! ^u^ I like Asami, he seems cool, and it's always fun to see Wolfram adapting to Earth life.
    Looking forward to reading more!

    Love,
    lucymaypotter (from ffnet)
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  • From ANON - SaphiraIce on January 30, 2007
    Yes! An update! I felt like I was waiting forever but it was certainly worth the wait! Nice smexy scene! ^_^
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