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Reviews for Ash's Sexual Journey, Part 2

By : scionofwisdom
  • From ANON - VerseMan on December 08, 2006
    If you need some ideas, I thought of one for you.

    Introduce Brock or Nurse Joy, and do a threesome.

    For keeping the fic linear, i'd use nurse joy, but i'm just throwing ideas out there.
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  • From ANON - DemonDude12 on October 08, 2006
    Whoa, awesome.
    This chapter was just as good as the first, even though I find Ash's mom hotter.
    I'll be looking forward to lots more!
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  • From ANON - narutoshiobi22 on October 01, 2006
    i think you really have writing potential. please continue this story i cant wait to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - angelofchaos on September 22, 2006
    omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2006
    please continue. you can have ash do gym leaders or any other girl he meets along the way. hell let misty or may get some action to please!
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  • From ANON - VerseMan on September 03, 2006
    Keep it goin'. It's good.
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  • From ANON - luffy-san-fan on September 02, 2006
    very very good. please make another one soon!!
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  • From ANON - TBoneTony on August 23, 2006
    It's different...but verry enjoyable.

    Besides this is adult fanfiction after all.

    Great job
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2006
    genius dude. your work is good.
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  • From ANON - jack on August 22, 2006
    You must continue.
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