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Reviews for Where you belong

By : Suryallee7104
  • From JubblesBubbles on November 18, 2012
    Amazing! Again! Tetsu and Chris and all the tension, adored it.
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  • From ANON - yuyu on September 07, 2011
    hi!!
    I was wondering if you're considering finnishing the fic?
    i really like it and you haven't update in a while so...??

    best regards!!
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  • From ANON - yuki akai on March 19, 2008
    hello!

    i really enjoyed your story and i was wondering if you could uptade or finish this story, cause its really cool.

    thank you and i hope that you update!
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  • From Azami on November 12, 2007
    *reads chapter 2* ... *blinks* Okay that answers my language question. German huh? Cool. German is one of the easiest languages in the world to learn. My grandmother and mother speak it fluently. I was taking classes in high school but they unfortunetly canceled the class halfway through my second year.

    When compared the two languages are phrased completely opposite each other, so the way you write makes sense to me, since I know some German. I just need to transpose and re-arrange the wording. Easy.

    Say, how about an exchange? I could help you with your written English and you could teach me some everyday German? Please? *Gives Puppy-dog eyes complete with crocodile tears*

    Amy
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  • From Azami on November 12, 2007
    This is a very good start. It flows well from one scene to another. Very good. However I would work on your grammer and syntax a bit more. In a number of places the way you phrase yourself is very difficult to understand. And use contractions like doesn't and won't. That will make it easier to read.

    It's not really any of my business, but would I be correct in saying that English is not your first language?
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  • From ANON - Tati on September 04, 2007
    You updated the story. Yay!!! I'm so glad that you did. I was anxious for an update. I love this story. There just is not enough stories with Chris and Tetsu. I have always liked this pairing.

    So now that you are about to finish this story... maybe you will update your other ones. Yes... pretty please with sugar on top?
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 03, 2007
    *winces* That explains why Josie ran away didn't contact anyone form her family! Does Leon know that his cousin was attacked and possibly raped? He has a right to know someone hurt Josie! Even if she didn't believe Chris when he told them about the animals being human, she was nice about it...And she said she loves Chris like a brother, I doubt that would stop, despite they having different views of life...I noticed she didn't say anything when Sam said she saw them too. I would suggest that Chris tell Tetsu and Leon about Josie's attack, and let the Ds handle it...
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  • From ANON - shrinefox on July 10, 2007
    wow this story is awsome please do continue it. u were right about the sleeping scene it was precious
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  • From ANON - Mino on June 05, 2007
    OMG OMG OMG YOU UPDATED *hugs*
    I is so happy, I was waiting so
    long for your update, but it was
    worth it, spledid work. can't
    wait untill the next one

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  • From ANON - Tati on June 04, 2007
    I hope everything is better. What you went through is rough. You have my sympathies.I am glad you are back. I have missed your stories.
    I love Chris and Tetsu and I hope to see Leon and D soon. =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on June 04, 2007
    *grins* I have already reviewed this over at Fanfiction.net. But I decided to read this to see if there's any parts i missed. Loving this so far! But i have to make this short, since my dad wants the computer when he returns from doing his errands. I dropped some comments over at your lj. I'm using this sn, because Shinigami is sadly taken.
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  • From ShiTiger on March 24, 2007
    Love this fic! Those two are just so cute together!
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  • From ANON - Esca on November 20, 2006
    Awws! That's so cute! And I don't remember that bit... and I reread the first 5 books today. Hmm, I should look over that one again.

    And, your writing is much, much better. It still needs some work; in some places you left out words or put them in the wrong order, but it is a *lot* better! I can actually understand what's going, now!

    And, oooh, I wonder what'd wrong with Leon, that he hasn't called!
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  • From ANON - Rectorlamia on November 06, 2006
    Awwwww That's so kawaii yo TT___TT Not cool. And the plot is so original you are awesome.
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  • From ANON - Miru on November 06, 2006
    Ooookay. Nice concept. I love the pairing, but really, it reads more like a long description than a narrative.

    "Christopher managed it also to embarrass the officer even"

    Which was what? It's like we have to assume what they're saying half the time. Let them speak! Don't just say that they said something. Like...

    "I really, really like... pie." Chris admitted with a... etc

    Because as it is now, I feel like you're sitting in front to me giving me a very long detailed story idea. It's more interesting if you have actualy dialouge.
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