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Reviews for Abduction

By : kiix
  • From Inigeshi on August 25, 2009
    Wow... just wow. i love your writing style and the little things that go unsaid are just screaming for my attention. i do love this fic and hope you conntinue it sometime son.
    DJ
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  • From Necrononymous on November 14, 2008
    Well written and true to the characters. The dialogue between the Elites seems carefully crafted and how I would imagine it being. The metaphors are very fitting and thought out as well; they seem to put things in perspective and emphasize the difference between Tanagura and Ceres.
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  • From J42 on July 28, 2008
    I do love your take on the spunky Riki - and for picking it up again after all this time. Thanks so much!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2008
    I really really enjoyed this. You have such an excellent flow to your writing, it just pulls you in from the first sentence. Also, you captured the balance between Riki and Iason perfectly and illustrated just how tenuous their relationship is. I especially enjoyed Riki just asking Darryl to hold him - Riki's pain was just so palpable that I truly felt for him.

    And the conversation between Iason and Raoul was exquisite. You have a great talent. *applause*
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  • From MarinLiliz on September 03, 2007
    Going through your collection of writings, and I love a good fanfic of AnK, so had to read it.

    I like how you put the thoughts behind the anime images and then added your own details. I always think that that anime was incomplete, too much left out, those 3 years of taming just a few seconds on screen, so i like where this is going.
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  • From ANON - D on August 07, 2007
    Wow, this was... Wow. owo''

    I haven't dared to read any Ai no Kusabi-stories since I read Taming Riki, since I didn't want to spoil the image it had given me. But for some reason, I ended up reading this now, and I have to say, I don't regret.

    You have a special way of writing, that makes the text more than a text, and keeps your eyes on it until it ends. Perfect, just perfect. Maybe me laugh and made me cry, especially the second chanpter and the intense feeling that was there.

    I hope you keep on writing, I really do. n___n
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on August 04, 2007
    I like this. I like it a lot. You've kept everyone beautifully in-character and shown the change from lust to love well. I hope you'll update soon, and email me when you do so I can read (and review) the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 31, 2007
    oh wow! For some reason, I thought that you had decided to stop this story. But I'm glad that you are continuing to write. This is great!
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 27, 2007
    W.O.W
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  • From ANON - krista123 on January 30, 2007
    Why you haven’t updated your story AK-Abduction. It is really great and it would be really a loss if you don’t finish it
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  • From ANON - DrkDreamer on January 14, 2007
    Oh - this is wonderful writing.

    I love how you captured (created?) the growing relationship between Iason and Riki. The despair, the concern. Iason's recognition that breaking Riki completely would destroy what he found so attractive to begin with.

    The scene with Darryl was so very touching. Wanting to be sympathetic, fearing Iason's anger - and gratefully receiving Iason's permission to be caring.

    Also like how Katze became somewhat of a mentor.

    Actually - liked the whole bloody thing!!
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  • From ANON - FogWolf on January 12, 2007
    I Liked your story a lot, I always wanted to read som good ANK fanfiction and I was lucky today. I really hope you keep going with this proyect. As other reviewer said, I like the complex relation between master and slave, and I think this person is right... The master can have the power over the slave's body, but is the slave that has the power over the other's feelings, I mean the slave doesn't have to be in need of the master, but obviosly te master needs this guy. It was interesting the way you created the situation wich both characters met.
    For suggestions, I'd incorporate Raoul in the story.
    And.. I'd like to, but I've haven't seen yet... What if, for some reason, the roles between characters or society changes?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2006
    I really enjoyed this. I'm very interested to see whether and how Riki's feelings for Iason change, how their relationship develops after this. I hope you continue with it. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - madlodger on October 09, 2006
    Hey, kiix , lovely fic. I have just finished reviewing Cake (one cool story) and checked your profile for more works and Wow! AnK! Wonderfull. I'll tell you honestly that I don't read much of Anime fanfiction due to poor quality, but your's I did and was very pleased with it. Very realistic and well written.

    Have you seen http://ainokusabi.atspace.com/
    If you enter and proceed to Official part then some treasures can be found ;D
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  • From ANON - wanderingaddict on October 02, 2006
    I always find myself drawn in to these types of stories, ones where the captured guy eventually becomes stronger than the master so to speak. For some reason, I have this fascination with seeing people recieve their comeuppance, and if anyone could pull off a good Iason/Riki story, it's you.

    As for story ideas, I've always wanted to find one of these where the ~rapist/master/fairly bad guy~ actually has to work damn hard to get his ~pet/slave/prisoner~ to like him back. I think it'd be absolutely wonderful to read your story of how Iason manages to stoke Riki's dying flame back to life, much less how Iason actually manages to get Riki to stop hating him/have consensual sex (and perhaps even something where Iason tries to seduce Riki).

    Anyways, I hope to see more updates soon (I mean, I hope my suggestions span no less than 20 updates please(j/k...kinda) :P).
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