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Reviews for The Whisper at My Side

By : JadeHeart
  • From ANON - Mel on September 13, 2006
    Ack!!!! You better write more!!
    You can't leave it like that... Please???
    I will be waiting.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on September 12, 2006
    KAMI....I hate you....that was so f@#king awesomely (is that a word?) angst....and me with no kleenex and snot dripping on my keyboard!!!!!....F@#king Kami I cannot wait for chapter 3...but I will have kleenex by then...or a roll of toilet paper...How do you clean snot off a keyboard?...LOVED IT....catti
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  • From ANON - chocho on September 12, 2006
    Wow. That was truly heart breaking. The only thing that kept me from actually crying was the fact that I am in the library at school and I don't like to cry in front of people. I was not expecting another chapter. The first one had me guessing till the very end what was going on. And this one was as I said before very depressing, especially at the beginning and again at the end. In the middle, I started feeling a little better and then...BAM! Gesh. Anyway, I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Mizuki on September 11, 2006
    Why!? WHY!? ... So sad... It made me cry at the end. That was your intention wasn't it!? Wasn't IT!? To make me cry out in emotional pain for him. Throughout the whole story I had this feeling that something was missing, or wrong if you will, and then near the end BAM! I knew it. I feel like total crap now... but in a god way, that means your story was good... But I still feel crappy. I think that this one was better than all that I have read... Well, the stories of Shuichi dieing and such. You made it really believable. I had actually no idea as to where the hell you were going with this and I sat there reading thinking, "What the hell's going on? And why isn't Shuichi talking?!" and then I slowly came to realize that it was a trap! A devious trap set to lure us in and shatter our hearts and minds to pieces. Well I hope you're happy. You've succeeded. I'm in shambles. SHAMBLES I TELL YOU! Good story though. But I didn't like it, it made me cry. I have to go redo my make-up now. Damn it, it takes me long enough already, you know, and now I have to completely take it off and put it back on. Forty five minutes I could have used doing something else but NOO!!! Well... It doesn't matter now I guess... But all in all it was worth it in the end. Great job. ^_^
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