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Reviews for Travels of a Martial Artist

By : kyhakubi007
  • From Scorpinac on February 29, 2008
    You'd think he'd be willing to put up with it long enough to at least finish school first. But, hey, your story. I guess I'm just sorry to see the end of the Senshi in it. Oh, well, on to another anime cross, right? Until then! Laters!
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  • From Scorpinac on January 25, 2008
    Poor Mousse. Yeah, that was something they probably should have thought more carefully about. Oh, well, ce la vie. Well, hopefully next time will be back to fun as usual. Until then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on January 21, 2008
    What, indeed? Especially since they seem to have forgotten entirely that she just let Ranma cum in her, twice, without protection! Do I sense a sudden and imminent dropping out for poor, poor Ukyo? Or maybe just a really expensive abortion? Well, I await #6. Laters.
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  • From dumbledork on January 19, 2008
    Great chapter. Was a lot of fun to see Ranma screw the senshi + Ukyo. Hope there'll be more soon.
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  • From dumbledork on January 18, 2008
    This story's getting stranger by the chapter. I have no idea where you're going with this. But I'll definitely read any new chapters.
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  • From Scorpinac on January 18, 2008
    Okay....I'm gonna go with Ranma's question - "What the hell was that?!" And do i detect impending orgy? Ooh, la la! I do look forward to chapter 5! Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on January 11, 2008
    Well, at least you've continued. Hmm, not what I would have expected, but I suppose it works. I do hope she talks him out of leaving again, it'd be a tad repetitive at this point. Also, when revising the previous chapters(I'm rather glad I took the time to re-read them both as it has been over a year since I last did so...), you still haven't added "Prism" between "Moon" and "Power" in Usagi's transformation phrase. The only time she ever transformed with "Moon Power" was when she was using the disguise pen, which is an utterly different itinerary altogether. But aside of that, looking good, and I await chapter 4. Laters.
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  • From ANON - dumbledork on October 22, 2006
    Really nice story so far. Will Ukyo and Ranma become senshi? After all, the new planets in our galaxy need their senshi too ^_^
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  • From ANON - Grey on September 19, 2006
    Interesting start to the story. Want to see more, soon if possible.

    Only gripe I have is Ranma going ronin over Akane's *food*, for crying out loud. Not the multiple engagements, the blackmailing, the emotional torments, the physical groping or Ranma's honor being used against him by people who could barely spell the word - the food?!?!?

    That and the Amazons - they would not give up so easily. Ranma's name was annonced on the news - they'd be showing up soon.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 15, 2006
    An interesting forst two chapters. It should be a very interesting ride. Now, I know you've probaly already heard this, but when the Senshi transform, Moon should say either "Prism" or, given where it seems you're setting this(between the Aliens/Doom Tree[Makaiju] arc and the Black Moon arc or between the Black Moon arc and the Deathbuster Arc), "Crystal" between "Moon" and "Power", and the rest should be saying "Star" between their planet names and "Power". Also, the only attack of Mars I know of with the word "Celestial" in it is "Mars Celestial Fire Surround", also known as "Burning Mandala", a wholly different attack from what you described, which is just "Mars Fire Ignite" or "Fire Soul". Just saying. Well, look forward to chapter three. Laters!(Will Sailors Uranus and Neptune be making an appearance, per chance? Cours, then Usagi's second word would need to be "Cosmic"...)
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