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By : Mikagechan

From Roxal on October 20, 2008
This is the most amazing Kyou Kara Maoh fanfiction I have ever read, I love it soooo much! I can't wait until you update it again~ I absolutely adore the drama, and I am anxious to see what comes next!
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From ashlin86 on August 20, 2008
My love for this story is boundless and complete. It's the kind of story that frustrates me, tickles me, saddens me, and enrages me--all with a style of writing that keeps my attention focused soley on my computer screen. These are the kind of stories that make me fall in love. Much like Celi's quest for "free love" I am constantly on a quest for "awesome fanfiction" and this one effortlessly meets the requirements. Easily tops on my "favorite fic" list.

As frustrating as Yuuri's waffling is, it's also incredibly...realistic. I especially love how you've managed to portray it, (both with Wolfram and the impending war) and see it all the way through when I'm sure you've been tempted many times to just give in and put them together. I know I would have been, and probably wouldn't have been able to hold out as long as you have. I respect you for that (what I imagine as) extreme willpower. While the fics that skip over the hard part and go for the easy resolution are comforting and less tense to read, they are ultimately shallow and leave me feeling empty and unsatisfied.

Wolfram, too, is a much more dimensional character here than in many Yuuram fics. I love how you've given him depth and vulnerability without making him seem diminished in any way. Your Wolfram is the Wolfram I love from the series: hot headed, proud, and stubborn but with a heart that's so beautiful and fragile that he has to conceal it with those other qualities. A good father, a good fiance/husband, a good soldier, but most of all--a good man and all-around beautiful person.

Your characterization is excellent with all the characters, though I'm only mentioning these two. This story sucked me in, broke my heart and spit me out at the other end. I eagerly await the next chapter and thank you for writing this gem of a story.
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From Niffty24 on July 25, 2008
As always a lovely chapter to a lovely and thought provoking story. I hope to see the next chapter soon!
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From SParker on July 14, 2008
about #7/14 and still reading...

I don't know If you've seen the new season of KKM online or if it's been
mentioned in a review, but the Ten Aristocrats have been featured, along
with Wolfram's father, in the first few episodes shown.

I forgot the number but I know it's before ep. #88, also Anissina's elder
brother is featured in the episode called 'The Bride is Anissina?', I want to
say that it's #89 or 90. He seemed like a carefree guy, kinda easy-going, but
is all about duty to his kingdom.

Now I know you have a lot of chapters already, but if you wanted to get an
idea of what's happening now, especially the introduction of the new young
king of Small Chimarron [it's spelled in different ways], Saralegui.

I KNOW I butchered his name, but they call him 'Sara' for short.

Anyway, just a little FYI.

PS: you had mentioned cross-dressing in chap. 7, so I thought I would mention this. In the third season [and one of the OVAs], they had Yuuri
dress up as a girl, now we've seen Yuuri partially dressed in a maid's uniform
in the first season, but that was NOTHING compared to how they did him
here.

Yuuri & Wolfram had to sneak into a party dressed as girls and let me tell
you, Yuuri outshines Wolfram. You NEVER would have expected the 'girl'
was Yuuri had you seen her. He was the prettiest ''girl'' at the party.

Just too cute for words...
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From punkin02 on April 06, 2008
I like the story so far, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters, I just wanted to let you know how much I liked the start of it before I continued:) Oh, and Yuuri's half-human. His dad is mazoku...that's why Yuuri's mom thought he and Shori were going to be born with wings...cuz they'd be half "demon"
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From Niffty24 on April 04, 2008
Oh man, you're killing me! This is an awesome story and I'm glad you do still do update.
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From LunaTheLunatic on March 30, 2008
Stupid stupid stupid! Yuri your so stupid!

I want Gwendal's head on a pike! Yuri you boob! you can have his head on a pike! you can do it! your the king! just...a ...few...words....and...*slapt!* no one will ever pull that ever again!....you'll just have to deal with the possibility of civil war......OK fine! no Gwendal head on pike....You can always strip him and put him in a spiked barrel and dragged behind two white horses? no? red hot iron shoes.... make him dance to his death?....OH COME ON THATS A CLASSIC! At lest think about it when your coming to judgment over the humans who tryed to rape and kill your family! Nothing says "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT TRYING IT AGAIN" like a fairy tale death sentience. Oh wait! You won;t even get that far cuz your a moron who doesn't learn anything from his past!

I have a feeling that these unknown villains want this war started.....for some unseen reason ....

I'll wait for the next chapter just... don;t forget!
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From darksinistra on March 28, 2008
I think I love this story more and more with every new chapter. I was reading so slow because I didn't want the chapter to end. The waiting is torture! Promise you'll continue this..even if hell breaks loose..and please finish it (although I hope it's not any time soon) This story is just too damn good to be left unfinished. Thank you for updating! :)
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From Chocho on March 26, 2008
At the beginning it almost seemed as if Yuuri was cursed what with his bursts of uncontrollable anger, but now it seems as if the others are the ones cursed. Yes, talking with Big Cimaron (sorry I spelled that wrong) does nothing. It never has. But going to war will accomplish nothing either. And Wolfram is right. They don't know who is behind this. It seems more like it is someone from the inside more than someone from without. But that's just me. And I think Maoh is right. Yuuri needs to get his cowardice ass back home where he belongs.
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From Ongaku on March 23, 2008
X_X You have made me go through so many different emotions while reading this, haha. This is one awesome and well thought out story. I like the slow paced romance going on... or not so much romance, but the fact that they aren't just, bang, together. You are actually making me get mad at Yuuri though, hahahaha. Never thought that would happen. Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks a bunch for witting this. xD
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From ChibiBerry on March 17, 2008
Oh God..that was such a depressing chapter! My heart broke..i really hope that yuuri will understand..please update soon, Im looking forward to your next chapter! 8D
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From nebulia on March 10, 2008
�Albert Einstein once said, �The world is a dangerous place, not because of those who do evil, but because of those who look on and do nothing.�

Oh, but Albert Einstein was also a hardcore pacifist. Do your research, Murata!
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From on March 05, 2008
I read this story a while back so my review is going to be sketchy in why I love it but what is important is that I DO love it :P I clicked on your story because I was looking for soppy Twuwuv which really doesn't have any in character moments and normally results in a male pregnancy (I think I'd just been watching Les Mis or something) and was (pleasantly) surprised that the OMG! MALE! WEDDING! FIC! wasn't a OMG! MALE! WEDDING! FIC! One thing I liked, personally, was how because we mostly all love Yuuri/Wolfram I wanted them to marry but god can you put an omen in. As soon as Wolfram made the promise to not sign any war declarations I knew something would happen, but not in a bad way. It wasn't 'predictable' but more just had this underlying suspense. Your fic made me happen.
And you like deprived us of pretty much any action, which was brilliant frankly cause it's realistic. Yuuri wouldn't suddenly say "you know what, I think Wolfram is quite sexy, let's have lots of animal fun"- but then you had the Near! Rape! Scene! and I don't know about you, but rape scenes are often very underplayed and made sexy. Yours had the affect a rape scene should have, I was like "NAAAO" the pink nightie probably had the best affect for me, something so innocent with something so O.O

One thing that really interested me though was how when people call Wolfram a whore he just seems to not deny it at all when he hasn't even done more than bloody snog him. Are they deliberatley putting up an image that their marriage is more than it is so the public doesn't suspect it of all being a.... conspiracy against the king I guess.

(Much luff- cause I luff it)

Sweaty Scotty
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From LunaTheLunatic on March 03, 2008
Ohh lord that toke me forEVER to read.... many sleepless nights cuz of you! such long chapters too, but thats alwasy good.it was Put togeather all lovely. LOVE this story its in one of my top must check to for updates list! i love the whole plot! everything and i would love to go into detail over all i enjoyed but i'm very very sleepy! all i have to poke at is that i had to skip a few paragraphs just cuz i felt like parts where going on and on about the same thing they just talked about in the last chapters or in fact... in the same chapter...

but i realy realy realy enjoyed it soo much and i want soooo soo bad for the next chapter~!!!!
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From darksinistra on February 26, 2008
OMG I can't believe you're back!!!! I'm sooo happy. Thank you!!
This was an incredibly tense chapter. I loved reading it and I am at the edge of my seat waiting for next chapter.
I didn't know they were making season 3!! How great is that!! Please don't take so long to post next chapter!!
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