Click Here!

Reviews for Though They Wander Far from Home

By : StrLtR0se
  • From NossdeSagel on December 03, 2008
    You should definetly do "Fai wakes up thinking he is in Ceres."
    Report Review

  • From seizansha on March 03, 2008
    wow... it's darker than the other fics i've read working this point, but there's definitely more story to it.

    i'd love to read more, if you're not gonna update here, where's your blog?
    Report Review

  • From ychan on January 13, 2008
    Nya, I like 2-4 (definitely not 1! that's just too sad -tears-)

    Wow, what a beautifully angsty story, I never thought about the 6 months they spend together in Yasha's camp, but this is awesome, the way you're filling it in. Well, I'm a total sucker for angst XD so I love it - please update soon, it's such a good story!
    Report Review

  • From Lunasariel on November 08, 2007
    Very nicely done, so far! I am deeply impressed. You've got more guts than most authors in this fandom, on any site, when it comes to describing... that which some might find it uncomfortable to write. I consider myself at least a semi-competent torture-fic writer, and I certainly couldn't have done this. You keep everyone very well in character, which is nice, considering I feared a scarily compassionate and pseudo-psychic Kurogane. After some minor, inital errors, your grammar and spelling seem to be up to scratch too. I would love to see this continue. Please update soon.
    ~Lunasariel
    P.S. I vote for option #4
    Report Review

  • From ElricHilf on September 01, 2007
    Poor Fai~!T.T
    I gave 5 rated for the rape scene!I like abuse and torturing,don't mind to write more!Your story..my mean,THIS STORY is attracting me and how I love the plot!^^
    I'm an author from Fanfiction.Net using the same penname Feathery Fear,so please don't mind to check on my stories too!
    About the 4 ideas for the 6th chapter,I think I want the last one.It's better if Kuro-pippi know what's happening and MAYBE you can make him caught them in action!*fangirlscreams* That would be awesome!
    I'm sorry I didn't review for every chapters because I'm lack of time and I got night class after this!
    Great job and update as soon as possible!See you on the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From Udyjay on May 10, 2007
    o: .. . . . ... DOOOOOOOD, KURO! C'mon, the clues are RIGHT there! They did rape-Fai baby, they DID! C'moooon! SDKLFJasdklf ::pulls hair::

    I love this fic. It's so evenly detailed, and I love the story line. As to the next chapter.. I think all of them are an awesome choice. XD So that's up to you, make it a suprise.
    Report Review

  • From Udyjay on May 09, 2007
    I will go over there and SMACK Kurogane! ): Omg, poor poor Fai! I want to take him and hug him and cradle him!
    Report Review

  • From Udyjay on May 09, 2007
    ): Omg! Poor Fai! That's no fair, those bastards lied on him. ;A; Now my poor baby has to suffer! Stupid Kurogane, for not trusting Fai. Hmph.
    Report Review

  • From Ketto on April 22, 2007
    nooo! you can't end it there! gah! i request that you bring this story out of hiatus soon. this is the best fanfic of their time in the Yasha camp and so thusly you are required to continue it ;) heh.

    as far as your question as to how the next chapter should start, they all sound awesome. but personally, i'm all romantic and stuffs and I like number four, the last one where he wakes up, but is too sleepy to care as to why Kuro is there. i can just see him snuggling up closer to him and being all content -which it would play in perfectly with him calming down at Kurogane's touch in his sleep. maybe after the innitial snuggles are over and he wakes up more, then you could throw in him sitting up and looking at him funny and wondering why he's there. it'd just be a shame for him to wake up all alone ;.;

    but i love it. you're weaving this story wonderfully and giving it the detail 6 months seperated from the others would definately require.

    and i like your idea of their eyes slowly turning black.

    but poor Fai! i wanna snuggle him and make him feel better. But Kuro can do that; and he can protect him to top it off, so that's way better ;)

    please continue! i'd be a shame for such a well written and well plotted story to end entirely. we need more writers like you! i'll be lurking and waiting for an update ;)

    ~Melissa the Damgel
    Report Review

  • From on April 01, 2007
    I love you stroy but i was just wondering, are you going to update the story anytime soon caus eit such an ammazing story it would be really disapionting for it not to be completed. Anyways once agian I love the story and hope that it is soon continued, oh and for the next chapter beging i think you should go with number 3, Fai ...not knowing where he is, but wondering why he's in bed with Kuro
    Report Review

  • From DepictedIllusions on February 11, 2007
    You have good material to work with for this fanfiction. The one thing that majorly rubbed me the wrong way was that it's exceptionally dark. A lot of people have different tastes but I thought as the reader that you could of held back a bit more when it came to the whole torture component, and Fei's helplessness. Besides those two things I felt you had a pretty decent story and characterization for your characters.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hachiko on January 11, 2007
    I saw this fic in fanfiction.net and I liked it ^^ For a next chapter I'de like Fye waking up thinking he's in Celes. Your story is so good and so angst I can't wait for more chapters to come ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yatte! on January 05, 2007
    Yah-ho! I'm the fiftieth reviewer!! Yay! I really hope you update, soon! I can only read each chapter so many times before I start obsessively writing 'update' on all the walls with my own blood! ^________^ just kidding, but seriously, update soon, please!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ima Loser on January 03, 2007
    bitch, when you gonna update??
    Report Review

  • From ANON - IceAngel on December 27, 2006
    oh wow no matter what one you choose I can't wait to read it! Please update soon again! Your fic is so well written and flows so perfectly- something that fanfics lately have been lacking. I'd love to read more soon!!

    ~Ice~
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!