Reviews for Sex is Bravo!

BY : Twisteddarkness


  • From Quadrius on June 15, 2009

    Oh look, a Girls Bravo fic that doesn't suck!

    I only have a bit of constructive criticism. I noticed a few times, especially in chapter 5, that you have a bad habit of changing tenses mid-story. That threw me off a few times, but otherwise isn't that huge of a problem.

    5/5, awesome story!

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  • From doomer5656 on April 06, 2008

    just thought id say nice fic i love the story and the anime keep the updates coming ^.^

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  • From ANON - Makyura on December 17, 2006

    Great! Can't wait to see it!

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  • From ANON - Twisteddarkness on December 15, 2006

    You...have a point. Thanx. i WILL have the next chapter up before this weekend is over! *evil laugh*

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  • From quamp on December 14, 2006

    It's about damn time someone else wrote a GB fic!
    As for the story itself, it seems to have a lot of promise. It'll be interesting to see how you can keep Koyomi in character and still have her doing someone. I had a large problem trying to do that.

    The only complaint I have is your review whoring. The whole story should never be kept hostage just because you feel that you need someone to review it. I've had numerous stories with multiple hits (some 1000+ hits) and no reviews. Write fanfic because you feel moved to, don't do it just to stroke your ego.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2006

    I like it. Update!

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  • From Twisteddarkness on December 04, 2006

    Same as last time people, i need to see some reviews b4 the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Anttolas on November 08, 2006

    looks good please keep writing

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  • From ANON - Masked reviewer on November 07, 2006

    Good so far and better use of words than the guy who writes the other ones

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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on November 03, 2006

    What's this? Another GB fanfic! First time in...forever. Looking forward to more!

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  • From ANON - twisteddarkness on October 31, 2006

    i need to see some reviews before i put up the next chapter you guys

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