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Reviews for Face in the Mirror

By : hawker748
  • From Dansama92 on February 03, 2013
    Woah man this story just totally blew my mind XD. Nice
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  • From Bagget00 on March 25, 2011
    Good story. I was wondering who she was when she started to drop little hints here and there in her speech, but wasn't expectng who it turned out to be at all. Thank you for the surpries and thank you SimmyC for the typo that started so many stories that I like.
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  • From ANON - Storyreader16 on October 28, 2009
    Wow. Okay, I thought I had it all figured out, that the new girl was Naru's and Keitaro's girl, from the future. But wow. I was pleasantly suprised at the pairing. About time Hina gets something nice. Overall loved the story, good description, good directive, was 'a breath of fresh air' to say the least. Thank you for putting this one up.



    ~Storyreader16
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  • From ANON - Luk-ass on April 10, 2008
    wow. great story. hina wasn't really in the main story so...KUDOS!
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  • From NarsheDelvar on October 20, 2007
    I gotta give this story a lot of lulz. xD I would have never known that that was gonna happen. shee shee shee!!!

    It really was a great story, and very sm3x3h. m/ The concept might sound really...nasty, but how you put it together really made it flow very well. I thought the ending was rather fitting for the story, especially how the events unfolded.

    I only had some trouble with a few spelling errors here and there that sometimes made it hard to distinguish who was being talked about, but that didn't bog me down. ^_^

    -Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-
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  • From ANON - Samuka19 on March 08, 2007
    Damn it man , incredible. This story unites smut with a creative plot , without losing the Love Hina feel. You mantained the characters's original psyches, so I believe that this could really happen in the Love Hina world (hell if a turtle can fly then a old woman can be young again).
    Thank you , from the bottom of my heart, for writting such a masterpiece.That really made my day , week , month and probably year >_> I will re-read this quite a few times.
    Sorry for my bad english , but I hope that I was able to express my feelings on your fic. Congratulations on being such a amazing writer and I hope to see a "Face in The Mirror 2" if it's possible ... Keep up the good job, you just got a new fan =)
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  • From ANON - xx on February 05, 2007
    xxx
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  • From chibinari on February 01, 2007
    i feel a butterfly in my stomach when i read this fics..all in all,i'll always support your fic..keep 'em coming..
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  • From ANON - Erissa on January 07, 2007
    Awesome fic! Just wanted to tell you, though that the chapter (under the drag down menu) has a typo, it says "A Face in he Mirror" Rather than "A Face in the Mirror" as I assume it to say. Unexpected twist!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2006
    Hi Hawker_784 i have read many of you fanfics and There is only one thing to say about your fics......................THE BEST ON FF AND AFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - benn454 on November 13, 2006
    Wow, hawker! Really raised the bar on the unusual pairings there. Beautifully written, as always. You have true talent, my friend. Now if only you would update Loss and Redemption 2 >.
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  • From ANON - Grey on November 12, 2006
    Good story, interesting coupling/premise. The only problem I had with it was how Sayuri got rid of the locket - I know she had to get rid of the picture, but there are more respectful ways to do it (the ocean comes to mind). Wouldn't mind a sequel/prequel if possible. Looking forward to more stories.
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  • From ANON - Wren on November 08, 2006
    Wow. Very good and well played with the characters. Down to the point of Keitaro's clumsiness, lol.
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  • From ANON - Cam on November 06, 2006
    Congrats on actually making this work. Who would have though you could make GrandsonxGrandma incest sexy? Now I have to go and question my outlook on the world >.>
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on November 04, 2006

    Excellent and wistful. Definitely not for everyone, but very much worth it regardless.

    Heh, it almost has the type of feel that some of Eponymous' El-Hazard fanfics have... only with sex.
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