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  • From TrulyWished on April 15, 2007
    That was really beautiful and definitely hit on the psychological issues with abuse and why it's so hard to leave behind. Excellent job.
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  • From yume1122 on January 27, 2007
    very good story. & a good way to vent frustration & anger too, i imagine.
    i've been used & even raped, but i still can't fathom that kind of violence....
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  • From yume1122 on January 27, 2007
    Chapter 7: i'm not surprised. up until this point my mind kept going "is it Omi or Yohji?..." (after u mentioned the blond that is -before that, i thought it might be Aya)
    being Persia would tend to fuck someone up, & then of course there's the way he was raised -a Takatori indeed.
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  • From ANON - ellen-chan on January 02, 2007
    I liked the characterizations, and admit you really had me taken in -- I had expected it would be Yohji who beat up Schu. Your desription of the domestic violence victim is really good -- behavior, reactions, etc. I think i would like to suggest that you add a warning faor character death, though. (If you haven't already) Good style too - not too much internal voice, just enough to make it clear how they think. Keep up hte googd work.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 15, 2006
    Now that was a twist. Thank you for writting such a good story. I am sorry to hear about your friend, may they find themselves in a better place.
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  • From ANON - gray on December 15, 2006
    nice! u kept the suspense throughout the story. i was shocked that it was omi though but well written
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  • From ANON - Davyn on December 15, 2006
    Omg. Thank goodness it wasn't Yohji! I was almost crying for a moment there! And then you said "Takatori" and I was like "Well, at least it wasn't Yohji." Then again, Omi fans may not like it, but. Blah.

    Hehe. That was really well written. You seriously had me thinking it was Yohji. Woosh!
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 12, 2006
    You ahhhhhhh!!!! I want to who it is. I can hardly wait for your next chapter. *runs away in tears to hide in a corner, mummbling about want to know who it is*
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 05, 2006
    Cries. I want to know who it is!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I can see Shu-Shu freaking if he finds out that he is there though.
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  • From ANON - Leela on December 01, 2006
    Please keep writing? I'm intruiged.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on November 30, 2006
    Who?! I want to know Who!!! Please update again soon I can't wait to find out who it is.
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  • From ANON - Kallipso on November 29, 2006
    Never mess with a red head you never know whose backing them. I can't wait to read more. You have a wonderful story going so far please keep it up.
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  • From Astrid on November 07, 2006
    Sounds like Nagi grew up beautiful indeed. ;) And he's learned to bring his talent to very good use, too, patching Schuldig up. I'm impressed. I'm also glad that the entire team Schwarz appears to be rather protective of the telepath (well, can't say that for sure for Farfarello--not yet). I get the distinct feeling that whoever roughed Schuldig up, has one hell to pay. I'm in best hopes they'll make them suffer sufficently. ;)
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  • From ANON - avari on November 03, 2006
    I like this story I really do, but seriously there's only so many times you can post the same thing ~ i'm sure you have loads of other fantastic stories that are waiting to spring free as opposed to constantly editing this one!

    that's not a criticism by the way merely a suggestion :D
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  • From ANON - annime on November 02, 2006
    I am looking forward to more. I want to learn where Schuldig has been and what has happened to him.
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