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Reviews for Give It A Chance

By : lilypad
  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2008
    heyo^^
    Well, I know youīve written this story two years ago. But Iīve just disecovered it and I like it that much that I have to write a review^^
    So, finally a Schuldig/Aya story... I like this pairing quite much! And you write it in such a wonderful way. Especially your Aya is really great! I like it how you show his despair, his loneliness, all the dark and desperate thoughts he has - and of course his yearning for someone that loves him. And Schuldig is so lovely in your story! How he takes care about Aya, how he helps him get out of his dark little shell... And well, itīs working, isnīt it? Another thing I really like is the way you describe Weiss and Kritiker. It seems really comprehensible that Kritiker doensīt let Aya go and that they force him to stay in Weiss by using his sister. Thatīs so typical for them. And itīs quite bad for Schuldig and Ranīs relationship, isnīt it? Argh, thatīs a shame: They found each other, they seem to get closer and closer - but Kritiker is always there to endanger their luck, huh?
    Anyways, i love your style of writing, and youīve got really great ideas!!!
    So is there any chance that you might continue this story?
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  • From MaiFujimiya on January 19, 2007
    Beautiful writing! I'm looking forward to the rest. This is a very good story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    Wow another lovely chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 26, 2006
    I have a feeling Schuldig isn't going to have nearly as easy a time tellling Crawford he's going away for the weekend, especially after ignoring his demands to return for the whole night. I look forward to each new chapter of this story!
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  • From ANON - evil_saint on December 21, 2006
    It's rare to find a truly good WK writer, which is why I'm SOOO happy to have stumbled across this fic. I read all six chapters in under two hours and can't wait for the rest. Got started on 'It's All Relative' from there, and I can officially say that you've got yourself a new diehard fangirl ^_~ Your pairings are unconventional, but you make it work, and that takes some doing. I'll definitely be looking out for your stuff in future. Merry Christmas and thanks for two fantastic stories!
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 18, 2006
    Another great story. Another great chapter. Very sweet, and I love to see these two characters given the grace of real affection. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on December 17, 2006
    I apologize for beginning to fear you might not return to this wonderful story. What a return -- with a sweet, juicy lemon. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    Amazing story. I love everything about it. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Swirly on December 05, 2006
    It never fails to amuse me that the hospital is named "Magic Bus"... or that Omi's high school is named after Koyapi. =P Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Swirly on December 05, 2006
    Great beginning! Eloquently written, actually takes canon plot into consideration. =P The only thing I'd have to complain about is your portrayal of Crawford... BradxSchu is actually my fave pairing, although two redheads is nice as well. Don't mind me, it's just a personal preference. ^^ Reading on~~~
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 25, 2006
    I have never reviewed before even though I really have been enjoying your stories. Gomen ne! But this chapter is so awesome that I have to leave a review. I love the developing relationship that Shu and Aya are having. Sigh......I'm really sad at how horrible that Crawford is being to Shu. It almost seems like he's jealous at times. Amazing writing on your part. This story drew me in and entwined me further with each chapter. The characters were in character and this story is actually realistic in it's depiction of the various characters. Great job!
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on November 20, 2006
    i really do like this one.i hope to get to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on November 09, 2006
    Ah, yes, indeed. The Schu-bear is one damn attractive package. Honestly, how could ANYONE resist him? Excellent as always, darling.
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  • From ANON - Arasoi on November 06, 2006

    I *like*! So few things are set after the OVAs, so it's nice to see that time period explored. I liked the beginning in particular, and your analysis of the team and the direction they're taking. I like your setting, plot, and characterizations, as well. I'm eagerly looking forward to more...

    I'm assuming that the drama CDs will not come into play, nor will An Assassin and White Shaman (based on Schuldig saying that he never had a previous interest in Aya)?
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