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By : BishiMistress
  • From sheyenne on February 14, 2007
    I loved it!!!!! But whats going to happen with them now......hm.....i wonder if they will stay together or will she go back to Cain... ah soo many question wandering inside my head and so little time to get them down. oh well. i suppose i have to wait
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  • From vbruce on February 13, 2007
    Beautifully done as always. I really enjoy Alex wanting to learn how to fly so quickly. Hell, I would.
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  • From DarkChaosMage207 on February 13, 2007
    this chapter was great. it was so cool with two crusniks just being together in those forms even though Alex hasn't been one for long. i would imagine it would be exciting for Alex to figure out flying, man if i could i would want to try it out right away! lol. i enjoyed it. though the end of the chapter was sad, poor Abel having Cain being such an ass. but it makes for a great story plot and Cain deserves some attention too. can't wait for the next chapter.

    ps-yur stories are not crappy!!
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  • From Caranril on February 09, 2007
    O.o That's so freakin' cool. Almost wish I was a Crusnik (or Kresnik). Almost. I suppose the loneliness would be difficult, but as you outlive those who you love anyway, you adjust quickly. At least Abel and Alex have each other. And Hugue. Aw, poor wittle Hugue-ness. *huggles Hugue plushy* Why can't everyone be happy? Oh, that's right: cause it's a good story!
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  • From Minastella on February 09, 2007
    Capitolo Eccellente!!!
    Thank you for the very good chappy!!!!! Oh poor Abel * shakes head * Envy is such a sin. However it is still so cute to see Hugue all loving towards Alex even though he can’t have her *sniffs* But I suppose Abel has a right to be jealous since she and him are in love. *Ponders for a moment * Oh well I am not one to talk, since lust is also a sin and I do a lot of that, lol but don’t mind me ranting about that! What a fabulous story, inspiring to all. Alex turning cruisnik, I like, I like. Can’t wait for Abel and Alex too…well how to put this? “Catch up”…..ok pretty much if you want to be straightforward have sex!! Lol Yay smut! I wonder how she will deal with the new powers and all. Yet what will the others think?!?! Bum bum bum! Of course I don’t really care what Esther would think, but that would just be me being an “Esther Hater.” Once again thank you so much for the chapter, it was truly wonderful and can’t wait for the next.
    Ciao!
    Minastella

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  • From DarkChaosMage207 on February 09, 2007
    wow!! i love love love this chapter!!!! it was my all time favorite chapter (besides the sex scenes lol). reason being is because it was so damn cool!! i love the creativity you came up with on Alex's change and its awesome that even though she's a crusnik she looks different from Cain and Abel. i could picture it all happening, i was glued to the screen the whole time lol i think my phone rang but i didn't notice. i'm so intersted in finding out how she handles things now, especially when she learns how to fly. Abel should teach her.

    i also can't wait to find out what you made the babies look like. hey, does Isaack have a hand in the pregnancy? is that how he could sense the change in her too and you didn't really mention other methuselah noticing it? or am i way off and my brain is just running away with ideas? oh i can't wait to find out!!!!! i'm pracitcally foaming at the mouth!
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  • From RetroLamb on February 09, 2007
    Alex as cruisnik 05 this is going to be very interesting! Did I say 2 babies huh I didn't even realize that??? Once again everything looks great. And thanks for the 12 step XD

    Retro Lamb
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  • From sheyenne on February 09, 2007
    OMG............dude how totally awesome. i must say that you are one of the best writers ive ever seen on here. im totally trying to be like you....nah i cant do that cause no one can copy you. loved it
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  • From Minastella on February 08, 2007
    Così bello
    I loved this last chapter! A shame Cain had to let her go for Isaac's love but non-the-less she was reunited with her true love*faints* Abel! It takes a lot to make this girl happy, yet you do it with such ease. Absolutely love the Cain romance....Mmmm what are you planning? I wonder lol. Well anyways it was good, as I would expect since it is you. You are a writing God! *Bows down* If only you could shine you glorious talent on my weak writings, lol. Cannot wait for the sequel! Yay love, smut and drama, the things that make the world go round!
    Until then,
    ~Minastella~
    P.S. yes don’t we all love new reviewers! Even though I am not a “new reader” I just finally got rid of my sloth demon and decided to write lol. But non-the-less ya reviews! Ciao

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  • From RetroLamb on February 08, 2007
    HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!! I totally freaken knocked my head on my keyboard when I first read this!!! (owie)so how is Alex knoked up with both as Cain relys his and Ables son if you could please shed some light on it and is she going to be methusula or a full fleged crusnik........( really hopes for crusnik). You are fabulous I am totally hooked on this story even more now and I didn't think that was possible. Shame on you for making me an addict XD!!!

    Peace out,
    Retro Lamb
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  • From Caranril on February 07, 2007
    Dude, I'm listening to "Broken Wings" piano version while I read this, and I must say it was a fitting theme for this chappie. Someone's broken, but the question is, who exactly?! Cain? Alex? Isaac? Perhaps even Abel now that his beloved's a Methusela? Only the next chappie will reveal the exciting conclusion! *end cheesy Pokemon narrative voice here*
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  • From OnyxHeart26 on February 07, 2007
    wow...are crusniks ACTUALLY able to do this...?

    (gee, I sound like a little kid...)

    I am simply enchanted by how you write this. Aw, poor Cain...that tore my heart in 2! Finally able to be loved (I know,I know...that line's OLD!!!), and then to have Alex ripped away. God...YOU MADE ME BREAK DOWN AND CRY!! I love though. I hate Esther...Ion likes her...egh. Ion should have killed her!!

    (why am I ranting about this? ...the world may never know!)

    Once my eyes landed on that last sentece Cain said...his child and Abel's? She's pregnant?!?! Holy crud, YOU SHOULD BE PAID TO WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS!! An unsuspecting twist!! *clap, clap, clap!*

    I lurv you!! Take this adorable smut puppy and a big pat on the back!

    WRITE MORE!!!


    Please?? M-chan.

    HUGHE-STYLE, BITCHES!!!!
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  • From DarkChaosMage207 on February 07, 2007
    oh my god!!! as soon as i started reading this chapter and you started hinting at changes and the way you worded things i figured out how half of that chapter would end! and the more i read it the more sure i was!! wow!!! she's pregnant! with Cain's baby! lol thats awesome!! though i can't wait to find out what Abel thinks about it. though...its kinda like his kid too since Cain and Abel are like the same? lol either way its still awesome and was not expecting that to happen until i got ot this chapter!! i hope Alex makes it thru the transformation cuz that would be really cool!! and baby crusniks!!! what's cuter than that?! lol at least to me. i'm so psyched to find out what happens!! its like puppies that drink vampire blood!!! or maybe not but oh my god baby crusniks would be adorable!!!

    lol ewwww chapter upload diarrhea and constipation!!! yet it made me crack up hysterically to read the way you word that!! i'm sooooo soooo happy to find out there's more to come!!! hooray!!!!!
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  • From vbruce on February 07, 2007
    Sweet! Wonder who the baby actually belongs to. They'll never know since Abel and Cain are identical and would logically have the same DNA sequences. Sorry, minored in Forensics. Love the interplay between Cain and Isaak. Excellent job as always.
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  • From DarkChaosMage207 on February 06, 2007
    *gasp* i haven't checked in a few days and i have no new chappies to read....*sniffle, cry, sob* i was so looking forward to it. come on people lets get reviewing so that addicted people like me can have their fix of more TB goodness!! i finally got all the drool out of my room from the Isaack and Dietrich chapter so now its ready to be flooded again!
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