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Reviews for Life Will Never Be The Same

By : LordSaturn
  • From ANON - tim nelson on November 11, 2010
    I think you did grate with the sex seancs. please contoune it thank.
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  • From Mic123 on October 18, 2010
    I loved it, keep it up
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  • From ShadowRaider on April 21, 2008
    the more I read this story, the better it gets!
    please, write more of this story.
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  • From St. Tabris on March 24, 2008
    Woohoo! Shinji in panties! HAHA! HAHAHA! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...!!!
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  • From Ikarifan23 on November 30, 2007
    Hey, since you were kind enough to critique my work, I thought I would return the favor.

    I see that, like me, you favor the Shinji/Rei pairing. There's a lot of Shinji/Asuka out there, and admittedly a lot of
    it is good, but this just seems like a more natural couple to me. I mean, the early episodes spend so much time
    developing Shinji and Rei's relationship, and then Asuka suddenly appears and the writers loose all interest.... oops, I
    think I just gave away part of the ending of my own story there.

    You're obviously more comfortable writing sex scenes than I am. I first came up with the story idea for 'Angel of the
    Heart' (what if every character were given one wish?) and quickly realized there was no way around it turning into a
    lemon. Hopefully, reading all these stories, including yours, will help me in the future.

    Wow, I'm not really talking about your story very much in this, am I? Sorry, I would have just sent you a simple
    thank-you e-mail for your feedback, but your e-mail is unlisted (Mine is ikarifan23@yahoo.com, in case you care). Thank
    you for pointing out how much Shinji's sudden knowledge bothered you; I'm sure other people were put off by it.
    Not to worry, all will be explained in time. That goes for the disapperance of Hikari's soul, too.

    Anyway, great job on your own story. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Spin on October 16, 2007
    Great story, but you need to work on your tenses. You keep switching between past and present;

    Shinji smiled and quickened his pace, adding a little more strength to his thrusts. -Past
    This feels good for him too. -Present

    Aside from that and some grammar, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - *Name* on September 19, 2007
    Over all was Pretty good, Also Was very nicely Paced but to me F/F Got Repitive, but not Terrible

    Ideas for Next chapters maybe? Use another male other than shinji, Dunno if Touji or another Person would work but Possibly something Diffrent
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  • From bigguy1234 on April 29, 2007
    awesome keep up the work
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  • From Yustax on April 18, 2007
    ht fic but why te 2nd hapter is the same??? update soon pls
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  • From play2dabone on February 13, 2007
    Update soon. BTW will it be a Rei/Asuka/Shinji lemon?! That would be cool. Nice work so far. Can't wait to read the rest
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  • From Raelax12222 on February 02, 2007
    i enjoyed your story really good and in mine i was trying to convey that shinji was forced into it too lol it just came out wrong
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  • From Shinji on January 23, 2007
    I call for you to CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - malpollyon on January 02, 2007
    Great work! Really looking forward the the other two chapters. If you need a pre-reader to catch some errors *before* posting, drop me a line.
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  • From ANON - Covante on December 21, 2006
    I thought this was great.
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  • From ANON - Kyte "Oblivion Fantasy" on December 16, 2006
    Very nice story. It was sort of WAFFed with total pervertness at the same time. However, there are some elements that made the story a bit difficult to get into. There are numerous spelling mistakes that can sort of throw the reader off. Improper use of grammer(missing comas and periods) made it seem as though the sentences were endless. Last, you described most parts well but others felt uncared for.
    Please understand that I am not bullying you, dictating the way you should write, or just being a jerk. I am merely trying to help you as you've helped me, which was a tremendous amount by the way.
    On a final note, chapter 2 for "Listening to Madness" is back in motion and should be up before the end of the weekend...hopefully. And now that I've seen how you formatted your story, I can try to apply to my own, making it easier for you to read. Well, see you soon.
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