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Reviews for One Night

By : maclynn
  • From yume1122 on February 19, 2007
    yay. ^_^

    thank u for such a yummy story. *claps & bows*
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  • From ANON - zetsuai2005 on February 18, 2007
    That was a very satisfying ending! (Though I was sad to see it end, it had been so enjoyable to read, but wrapping up a story at an appropriate point is a handy skill.) I'm so glad Aya-chan intervened, though Ran was holding up well in his sorrow, his focus being then on taking care of his sister. Though it was entirely joyful that they got back together at the end (which was really a beginning) I enjoyed the character development you created in each man. It was interesting to watch the changes, and I think they'll have a healthier relationship because of it. Great story! I know I'll come back and read it again. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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  • From Ginny on February 18, 2007
    *squeels* Whiii that's so cute!
    You honestly got me worried when you let Yohji dream Aya was dead! GDear gods... And than when it seemed like Aya was going to go... But I just knew everything had to come out fine! Whiii! It's so sweet and cute and- and and and Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel!!! XD
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  • From MikaSamu on February 18, 2007
    Hurray for Aya-chan, and a terrific, sweet ending to a lovely story!
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  • From KansouAme on February 18, 2007
    Yatta!! *big happy smile*

    Thanks... loved the story!
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  • From yume1122 on February 17, 2007
    please tell me that's not the last chapter to this. i'd believe it if it was, knowing how things stand at the beginning of Gluhen... *sooo bitter*

    but couldn't u give us a nice AU ending anyway? ....PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASE?
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  • From KansouAme on February 16, 2007
    noooooooooooo... poor Yogi.. poor Aya *sniff*

    love the story, please keep it up :)
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  • From yume1122 on February 12, 2007
    i still want to know if the others have realized what's up with those two yet. *pouts slightly*
    i love how you're working in these details. after i discovered yaoi for this universe i promptly went back & watched the whole thing again -to pinpoint the little moments that would suggest a pairing. surprisingly, i found more AyaxOmi references than anything else. ......or maybe that's just what i was looking for at the time. lol. ^_~

    keep the updates coming. this is good stuff. ^_^
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  • From yume1122 on February 03, 2007
    mmmmm. warm fuzzy hot smexiness. ^_^
    so ....when do the other 2 find out?....i mean Ken lives next door to Aya, right? & i think Omi's apartment is next to Yohji's. the walls can't be THAT thick, right? ^_~ & even if Ken is oblivious or in denial, omi would catch on to SOMETHING....
    *shrug*

    & then of course, there's Yohji's appropriate foreboding....how close are we to Sakura shooting Ran?...or does Schrient still have Aya-chan?
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  • From yume1122 on January 30, 2007
    i apologize that the smilie seems to be teh only response i can come up with for the wonderful waffyness & slight angst.

    this story continues to be really well written & i always look forward to more. ^_^
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  • From yume1122 on January 30, 2007
    ^_^
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  • From KansouAme on January 28, 2007
    Very exciting! Please keep it up!
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  • From yume1122 on January 21, 2007
    ^_^

    that's all i can think of at the moment, except that i feel a rather large rock looming in the near future -as in the next day perhaps....?
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  • From MissEntropy on January 20, 2007
    This was good. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between Omi, Ken, and Yohji when he tells them that he and Aya are dating. Write more soon

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  • From yume1122 on January 18, 2007
    *biggest grin EVER*
    awwwwww. they're so HOT. ^_^
    & u write all of the confusion of life & emotions & survivors guilt VERY WELL.
    there ARE no rules to love, etc, all that jazz. Brilliant. i lot of fanfic writers give in to the 2D characters seen on the screen, u go beyond that wonderfully! ^_^

    & Yohji was so SUBTLE! ^_~ lol -announcing his intentions & then just DOING it. ^_^

    i can't wait for the rest.
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