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By : Tsuichi
  • From ANON - Ciana Rui on July 17, 2007
    This was a very sad story and just proves that Ran has the emotional capacity of a tuber vebetable. I like that your OC has a spine and does the best with what she is given. I also appreciate her handling of Ran and the fact that she is like many other emotionally scarred women in that attachments are continued even though reality takes the fore (for instance, sleeping in his shirt every night for comfort and retaining that affection even after all the callous things he has done to her in the past). These things make her seem that much more realistic.
    I also like the name of the club The Geisha Dream. Creative!
    I would like to know more of the backstory on this as well. How did they meet? What brought them to the point they are at when they meet again at the casino? Are Ran and the other Weiss part of the police force now (that part confused me a bit)?
    Excellent job! I will read your original as soon as I have the chance. I am actually on vacation in San Antonio for a week, but I wanted to respond to your request immediately. (Also, you might check out Judecca's account. There are several originals in there that you might like.)
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