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Reviews for Punishment

By : devil
  • From keinNick on January 06, 2012
    As for the first chapter: Although extremely hot, but a little too abusive for my taste. But considering you have placed the story pretty early in the series, it seems rather appropriate, seeing Rika was quite harsh on Renamon back then.

    The second one is definitely my favourite. Just everything about it is great. You had a lot of really good ideas and the realization thereof were small strokes of genius each time, the whole role reversal being the best of them. I really can't say what part of their play I liked most, since it all was brilliant in it's own way.

    The third chapter wasn't that great, in my opinion. Maybe it was outshone by the previous one, maybe it was because I didn't like the pairing that much (These three girls sure are hot as hell, but Rika and Renamon are an always will be my number one favourite.) It's that I didn't like it, but not far as much as the first two chapters.

    I have to admit I only skimmed through the forth chap, since it was late and I was tired. The glimpses of what I read and still remember though actually aren't that great. The whole owner-mistress-slave-pet-thing seems overly complcated, sadly, the ideas for the sex scenes were only average and seemed a little overused.

    One thing I noticed in every chapter, you made a few spelling mistakes, some of them impairing the reading fluency. They kept becoming more towards the end of the fic, the first two chapters being almost free of them, but occuring quite often in the forth one.

    Anyway, all in all, this is a great lemon, definitely one of my favourites.
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