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By : DarkMaiden

From xain34 on July 03, 2009
Sits back and waits silently.*
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From CrazyIvan on May 17, 2009
Hey, dry those tears. Sometimes a story just exceeds the physical limits to be finished, sometimes things get in the way, no matter what the case, all that matters is you had fun writing the story, and people had a good time reading it. That's how people need to write, when you enjoy what you do, it comes out well.

This was an excellent story in my opinion, and look, just because it's stopping doesn't mean it's the end. We'll always remember not only this, but you for it.
I'm damn proud to have been a reader and reviewer for your work here, and I wish you all luck and god speed with your other projects.

Some of us down here, especialy me, would like to shake your hand and buy you a drink.

Semper phi, carry the fuck on...
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From SSjDiizoid on May 09, 2009
I'm both saddened and happy. Sad that the story is getting cut short rather than being completed as intended, but happy for you that you have this opportunity.

I wish you the best of luck with your movie project, DarkMaiden! I know you can make it a great one.

Looking forward to seeing the (series/story, yeah?) finale. Good luck! To be honest I think a sketch/drawing of Alex would be pretty neat but you don't have to do it. I hope to see you back here writing and reviewing on AFF.net some day.~Ulforce
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From CrazyIvan on April 15, 2009
I completely forgot what the last chapter I had read was so I just went ahead and reread it all.
Not much I can say beyond the usual "brilliant". The work is just that great, it warrants no correction from me.

As for you computer problems, what kind of back ups do you keep? I personaly keep everything on paper, adn 3.5inch floppies.

Anyways, keep at it, I'll get back into the swing of reading again, it's been too long sinc eI've been on AFF and all my favorite people are still here.

Semper phi, carry on.
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From xain34 on April 03, 2009
This is getting strange, and fucking crazy...I like it. ^_^
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From DarkMaiden on March 28, 2009
Hi. As always thanks for the reviews, they�re always welcomed!

Now to answer some of the questions:

Basically they just don�t want to do what Team Rocket did with them, so as long as the recruits aren�t there by brute force or by full manipulation (not having any free will) they don�t feel it�s unfair, they see it as �offering them honors�. Damien is now trying to avoid them from using unnecessary influence generated by abilities because he saw Nina getting way out of her mind cursing a human just to �mark her territory�, compared to that Lilith and her skill to make people fall madly in love with her is a minor issue. Sam could have said no and he didn�t (spoiler...sorry), that�s all Damien cares about for the big picture, but he does worry about Lilith overusing or misusing her skills keeping an eye on her.

The Characters Data files are merely to refresh people�s memory of who is who lol, Bradley and Ryo are good examples, they�ll go into the spotlight soon but without the Char Data I doubt people would even remember they existed�poor things I so gotta make it up to them.
What I mean is that I tried to avoid any spoilers or details when writing that, sticking only to the basics. I said Damien was mixed with an Alakazam and I added that his first powers were Psychic and evolved from there, but I didn�t go deep enough to say he�s a traumatized telepath since childhood (I figured it would spoil chapters 7, 8 and 9 of Season 2).

Till next time**

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From SSjDiizoid on March 27, 2009
Firstly: I'm sorry to hear you lost your original work! I know what thats like and it sucks, royally.

I was glad to see Gabriel gaining the upper hand in the battle, though it serves him right to have been shocked for losing his rational sense of mind. Nevertheless it was still satisfying to see Bianca taken down in the end. Very satisfying.

So it seems Sam is still somewhat normal, he hasn't fully become controlled by his master if I understood his thought process right. And I always thought of him as more of a naga than a merman haha

The bloodlines sound like an intriguing addition to the whole hybrid situation.

And aw, poor Damien... so he was a natural psychic to a certain degree and Team Rocket/Genesis amped it up a few (dozen) notches.

Noah's suicidal, huh? Not on the pills or anything to prevent it, I guess, but then again maybe they wouldn't work on a hybrid subject.

Another good update DarkMaiden, and again, I'm sorry to hear you lost the original chapter!
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From xain34 on February 13, 2009
That was a pretty neat chapter, if you do ever find yourself in a "Oh shit, what do they do now? O_o;" moment, throw my character, using a Biochemist is always good for a laugh. XD
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From SSjDiizoid on February 13, 2009
Its nice to see some more of Team Genesis complex plans appearing. Same goes for the in-fighting between Gabby and Bianca.

Poor Sam sounds like he's gone over to the dark-side, just as Jack has, but far more dedicated. I still feel like Jack is just biding his time to break free, but when he can truly be free and not simply be hunted down and taken back again.

I'm expecting Vi to take Sams death rather badly after the kiss, more so than it would have usually been.

All and all a good update, DarkMaiden! Looking forward to the conclusion between Gabby and Bianca!
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From SSjDiizoid on February 02, 2009
Just wanted to say congrats on surpassing the 30k mark on hits, DarkMaiden ;)
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From xain34 on January 14, 2009
Sorry, I was busy making videos. But yes, I'd like to see more.
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From SSjDiizoid on January 09, 2009
Although it took me a few minutes to recall where the story last left off, I was able to quickly get it together and dive back into the new chapter. I must say its curious, though somewhat short. What would the diamond/map lead to, perhaps the other Arceus Plates locations? Its good to see some of the other Team Genesis characters are getting their time in the lime-light as well this chapter.

In response to the side note: I find it deliciously ironic that I forgot about my character winning in the pokemon league here! Considering the way things are going, I'd ask that Alex join up with Vi and Max, even if it is briefly, to help deal with the Team Genesis threat. Off-screen investigating, so to speak if it would take up too much time to have him with them for too long.

Good update, and I'm glad to hear updates could be coming more regularly! I'll see ya next time~ Ulforce.
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From SSjDiizoid on November 25, 2008
Well, thats a surprising twist: The evil bastards are trying to save the world? Oy. I wouldn't have expected that in a thousand years. Nice plot twist.

I also have to take back something I said last time, about cutting chapters short to keep going. I have to agree with Nevyn. If it takes you a year, but the chapters are well written and such, then please, take the time you require to write them.

We don't always have alot of time to do the things we want, but rushing what we do enjoy simply to keep it going isn't the right way to go about things... Pretty much keep going at your own pace, and don't worry about update speeds DarkMaiden.

It was some nice character devolopment from Jack this latest update, the same can be said of Damien. Again, good plot twist, completly unexpected.

So: Good work, DarkMaiden, lookin' forward to your next update, be it a month or three from now. And before I head out, Happy Thanksgiving to you! ~Ulforce.
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From daveb on November 11, 2008
I for one absolutely adore this story and really think you should finish it. Perhaps if you decreased the pace you write at, maybe took some time off from writing occasionally, you would feel refreshed enough to continue the story as you originally planned as i for one would be more than willing to wait.

Either way, even if you stopped right now it would still be one of my favourite AFF fics ever. I just feel it deserves a proper ending even if it takes a year or two.
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From DarkMaiden on November 09, 2008
Thanks everyone**

"What I do ask of you, however, is to post a message � it doesn�t need to be more than a few lines � just so we know you haven�t given up on the story."

I decided not to give up for now, let's see how it all works out. I need to re-edit the second part of the current chapter but hopefully the update wont take more than a couple of days.
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