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Reviews for Interruption to a Bath

By : haruharaharu
  • From ANON - majingohan on November 25, 2012
    It's one of the greatest tragedies that this story was not continued beyond its fifth chapter. I always had a fascination with Kanako's character and while the fourth chapter is something of a mural of emotions, I liked that this was heading in the direction which mixed the erotic and emotional aspects of the story into one whole. Great read!
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  • From ANON - DARKDEATH98 on February 04, 2011
    You are truly a master of your craft. Putting Kanako in those disguises seriously tricked me, and man, was that awesome! I've never been suprised by a lemon before now, and I've got to say it's an awesome experience. Keep doing waht you do, this is the best Love Hina lemon I've EVER READ...
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  • From ANON - DARKDEATH98 on November 15, 2010
    WOW. This story is one of the best I've read. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, I LOVE this pairing. Kanako is my favorite character (I don't know why though, I liked Sarah more from her first appearance). Anyway, this story is great. I look forward to reading the rest of it. Keep writing fan fiction, you have talent my friend.
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  • From ANON - ry on May 20, 2009
    Great story i cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From play2dabone on April 10, 2008
    When are you going to update this? And please go back to doing more Keitaro/Kanako hotness without the BSDM.
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  • From 1upmushroom on February 03, 2008
    Great work, really.

    And without looking at other ppls reviews... Would it be Half-Life? Unforseen Consequences chapter?
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  • From ANON - Unentschieden on January 21, 2008
    I really enjoy this story, thanks for updating. I hope you will continue it, Keitaro/Kanako is one of the underrepresented pairings unfortunately. I also would like to have her dress up some more (even if not in a sex scene) since that angle of her makes her really unique (next to the ventriquolism(?)).
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  • From ANON - Duran on January 14, 2008
    Quite interesting... though I wonder what other tricks Kanako might have. And Kanako is an exception... when sighted naked, she'd sooner jump him than hit him or faint.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2008
    .......genius man that whole haruka situation was gold it completely fooled me and it was at least something that isnt seen in too many love hina fics which is a shame ..getting back to the story you should definetly update soon
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  • From haruharaharu on January 07, 2008
    @Kanakofan:
    Sorry, I've never used this section to respond to reviews, but I'd like to recommend that you read the entire chapter.
    On a side note, that review sort of answers what I was wondering in my notes at the end of that chapter, at least for one person.
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  • From ANON - Kanakofan on January 06, 2008
    As much as I found you most recent chapter with Haruka spoiling the couple's fun and having her way with Keitaro I didn't like that she had knocked out Knanko just so she could sleep with her cousin. Which ponders me to beleive it will evetually lead into a nice warm wet threesoem between the three. I jsut happened to have read yoru other fic Garden of Thanatos and man this lemons had my fulll attention if you know what I mean. Oh I didn't now about that. It makes sense with Kanako being his adopted sister and Haruka his cousin. Talk about a huge shocker.

    When will the next chapter be out?! Please update ASAP. I want to read some more Keitaro/Kanako action.

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  • From ANON - greatful reviewer on January 06, 2008
    great new chapter and an awsome way to improve the plot this is one of my favorite stories
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  • From ANON - Killerman83ca on January 05, 2008
    I liked the new chapter you put in so please keep it coming
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  • From ANON - Branner Hawk on January 05, 2008
    Not bad, but Kanako is Keitaro's ADOPTED sister meaning she is NOT related to him at all. So you may want to amend that content thing.
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  • From NarsheDelvar on October 10, 2007
    There is no shame in seeing what your weakness is. But that did not deter from the fact that it was very well written, and quite steamy. =3 I've always loved the Keitaro/Kanako pairing, though not many others did, and at one time thought about doing something about it, but never did. kekekeke...You've got a really good grasp of the physical aspect of being able to write, and I'm curious as to see how well you can develop the emotional aspects. Granted, this story barely had little like that, it would have been very hard to implement something like that into the story without making it insanely long, there-by creating an alternative to the story. But I would not have minded that one bit. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

    -Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-
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