Reviews for Justice?

BY : Nine Lives


  • From KrystalChronicals on May 23, 2007

    Great story

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  • From SilverwindFara on April 02, 2007

    A great ending... Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  • From SilverwindFara on March 26, 2007

    I'm looking forward to the last chapter. This is a very nice story.
    There were som spelling and grammar errors as you said yourself but nothing that affected the story in a bad way.
    English is not my first language either and I know how hard it can be to get a betareader.
    Keep up the good work!

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  • From Sairin on March 25, 2007

    ah i love this chapter..a nice twist and development
    i'm glad there will be more chapters..i think it would be nice as a longer story..
    i really love their intereaction here, there is much unspoken depth to it, like shadowed emotions
    i like when Raito is both evil and kind or passionate at the same time hehe
    and L didnt' get to pee =P

    i think your story is great, maybe you should post it on fanfiction.net to get more feedback from there..just a suggestion ^^

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  • From Sairin on March 18, 2007

    the way you've written it is so interestingly done
    i was wondering where L was at the present moment..would not have thought he was remembering those moments after his death
    so the last part was quite bittersweet and interesting twist
    yeah and i always thought L wouldn't feel that he lost when he died..more like he was glad he was right..well iono lol
    well it's all interesting and this is a great fic =P

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  • From Sairin on March 17, 2007

    yeah there were quite a few grammatical errors...but it's really well written despite that!
    good descriptions and argh iono it's jus one of the sexiest things i've ever read x_X
    it reminds me of the doujinshi 'taikutsu' where the same thing happened..L brings Raito food and they had sex =p
    and L as dominating character is mysteriously scary but so hot!
    and Raito is so cute and sexy when he's eating like a puppy ^.^;;;
    well all in all i really love this fic! so please continue :D

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  • From Mina L on March 16, 2007

    Well, the grammar is a little shaky, but that's something that can easily be fixed, so all and all a good chapter! Please update soon, I'm looking forward to whatever happens next!

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