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Reviews for Bling

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - what is it? on March 11, 2011
    I think you are a good writer, your style is ok... which makes me a little sad because it feels like a waste that your stories aren't that good characterization and plot-wise. Yes, Omi is a complicated character, and while you don't write him like a 10 year old, he still is OOC. He doesn't relate to Schuldig, quite opposite actually. He is not going to have hot sex with him either, no matter how sexy Schuldig is. He doesn't want Schuldig anywhere near him, especially when Schuldig is still breathing

    As for this story... Oh god... I was going to hold back but I just checked your journal, and I guess there is no reason to. I am pretty surprised that you mock other WK fanfic writers when you write what? A story where Omi goes clubbing to get a laid (the very same Omi Tsukiyono who blushes and stutters at the *thought* of having sex and is extremely shy about that kind of stuff; maybe it's not obvious in Kapitel but it should be if you are familir with Forever White novel, Holy Children, Flower of Spring), only to have sex with Schuldig of all people, without noticing it's him... I am pretty sure there are many redheaded Germans in Japan. Did Omi even regret it? And it's all *after* Ouka's death? Shouldn't he be just a little oversensitive to tall red-headed long-haired gaijins?

    In All That Weiss it's stated Aya is the leader
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  • From Tsuichi on April 08, 2007
    I review very rarely, but I felt that this story required one.

    At first, I was very surprised at the pairing, but honestly, it suits this story.

    The style in which you wrote the fic first threw me off, and it took me a while before reading it didn't confuse me.

    But honestly, my full opinion is that this is one of the most intense scenes I've ever read. It's intense to read, to imagine, I could almost taste what you were describing.

    Congratulations. I'm one of the hardest people to please on this site. And you've won my award of the year. ^.~
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  • From yume1122 on April 02, 2007
    oh GOD i hope there's more to this!!! XD like -IS there a next time? &/or will Brad's warnings bear any fruit? does Brad CARE about the event? he obviously Saw it.....

    it was slightly difficult to distinguish btwn the 2 voices in schu's head & Omi's occasional thoughts. (maybe b/c i'm used to more solid thoughts from the ppl Schu's reading, instead of threads of emotion.....)

    & how do the rest of Weiss or Schwarz or Schrient (who i believe is still around at this point) play into this....
    does this come before or AFTER Takatori took the golfclub to Schu & Farf for killing Ouka?
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  • From TrulyWished on April 01, 2007
    Wow. *fan* very hot. I particularly love how Schuldig seems to be having a conversation with himself the entire time.
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