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Reviews for Lost and Found

By : angelronin
  • From Distantskyking on May 05, 2007
    *horrified* OMG! YOU *points finger* are badly in NEED of a BETA!!!

    First of let me say this... I'm a DIE HARD Haruka/Michiru fan! But even so, the idea of Haruka and Setsuna together... appealed to me a great deal.
    So here I was excited to read this fic but instead of getting my boxers wet it ended up giving me a GREAT headache! *rubs my aching temples*
    I'm going to asume (correct me if I'm wrong) that English is NOT your native tongue but the grammar in this fic is VERY bad, the scentences are literally and literarily WRONG and THAT is what makes this story of yours a BIG pain to read, to bad because it has great potential just like the pairing does!

    So please take this advise to heart and FIND someone who is good at English and let them help you revise this story AND help you with ALL your future stories.
    I hope to see other stories from you in the near future but for now...

    Greetings,
    ja ne.
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