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Reviews for Merging of the Balance

By : NecroNight
  • From Churn on August 30, 2014
    How about Gardevior or Misdreavus? They both have psychic powers, and Misdreavous can turn invisible and incorporeal, so it could lead to really unique scenes.
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  • From sumomo17 on April 29, 2008
    please tell me your gonna finish this i really would like to read more
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  • From jusenkyo on April 15, 2008
    maybe some legendary pokemon
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  • From Ferai on May 29, 2007
    I'm going to agree with RAW on this one, it's the merger of technobabble and sex that makes this chapter unique. Hell, I found the firewall joke to be strangely amusing. And the ending was a very nice touch, showing that she wasn't as emotionless as thought.
    And the fact that I'm not the only one trying to start out here just makes it all the better.
    If you want a request for pairings then might I suggest using Gardevoir? Or even a Bellossom?
    Anyway, loved the story and am hoping to see more.
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  • From RAW19 on May 28, 2007
    oh my god! it's the techno-speak that gets me! excellent chapter!
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  • From pettrum on May 26, 2007
    Good story, I didn't notice many grammatical/spelling errors, and the lemon scenes were well done. One request - at some point, for any reason you can work into it, can you have somebody ask "What's the frequency, Kenneth?" (google the phrase to get the reference if you don't already).
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  • From RAW19 on May 25, 2007
    oh, my, gosh! this story is great! i look forward to the next update!
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  • From bloodrain01 on May 25, 2007
    I hate you !...........PLease write more got me at the end of my seat
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  • From UnholyJustice on May 07, 2007
    I for one thought it was very well written compared to the over done ash/may/misty fanfics etc. It was pretty original. I say keep up the story!

    Well I dunno what sex the bayleef is or is the fire will be a huge problem but that could be next...
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