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Reviews for Return To Me

By : maclynn
  • From ANON - zetsuai2005 on March 17, 2008
    Sakura???!!! OMG, who would ever have thought?! Loved the lemon, very tender and yet passionate. I hope this is the last time Aya has to kill to rescue Yohji, but the future as assassins together will probably bring that scenario again. Wish Yohji could make peace with Mamoru before they leave Japan, though. Well written and fast-paced. I have really enjoyed this story.
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  • From KansouAme on February 03, 2008
    I so love the way you write these characters. I am on the edge of my seat until the next update. I hope Aya reaches Yohji in time!
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  • From ANON - Amet on February 03, 2008
    wow! great chappie! but cliff-hanger >.< i've got to wait again for nex update to see wat happens :sigh:
    but pls continue, love this story, pls continue... poor bois cant get together even for a while
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  • From ANON - bahnona on December 29, 2007
    Now, that cliff-hanger is pure evil. I haven't been keeping up with this fandom lately, but I've always enjoyed your writing. I'll definitely check back soon in hopes that you'll have updated. Thanks for posting!
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  • From jukeboxcsi on October 23, 2007
    Oh man! You stop at the WORST possible places, you dang tease LOL. Must. Update. Now! :D I'm anxious to finally see who wants to kill Yohji and why.
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  • From ANON - zetsuai2005 on October 03, 2007
    Alllllrighttt! Finally!! Glad they made that confession to each other. I'm still just as engaged with your story as I was after Chapter 1. I love the subtle differences you explore from the way this pairing is usually written. A whole chapter of them 'saying' how they feel about each other with their bodies is not lost on me. Mystery Lady, you're going down!!
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  • From KansouAme on October 02, 2007
    aarrghh a cliff hanger!!

    Great story! Love these guys together! Can't wait until you update and find out who the mysterious woman is.
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  • From ANON - Amet on July 26, 2007
    Great story so far! and i;m loving it. YxA is my best pairing in anime and I love to read their stories. Nekojita's story got me hooked to YA pairing with no way back.
    I wish Youji would confess already so that Aya would be happy and do so himself as he came back for that purpose in the first place.

    I wonder who is that woman in the dark.

    hope u;ll update soon~ ^ ^b
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  • From ANON - aleiah on July 21, 2007
    Hold up, who's entering the room? They just interrupted my lemon. I can't believe how great you are in keeping the characters in character. Yoji's feelings of being abandoned & Aya's anger and sadness at having to leave his lover behind were all portrayed beautifully. Can't wait 'til the next chapter. Keep it up!
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  • From MikaSamu on July 20, 2007
    This is so wonderful! I love your fidelity to the characters and the series. You accurately portray all of Yohji; so often he is shown only with his better features, thus minimizing the depth and complexity of the character. Similarly you accurately show the warmer, caring side of Aya, when often that is neglected. You manage all this in the midst of an exciting plot with dangerous hints from both the mysterious woman and the assassin. I feel sorry only for Chloe, whom it appears will not be getting back on Aya ready to commit to him. Evil cliffie, so many possibilities for who is coming through that door -- not to mention for the persons who were so close to coming.
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on July 20, 2007
    so very good more please
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  • From jukeboxcsi on July 19, 2007
    Ack! You can't stop there! Oh man, how disappointing that they were just about to consummate and then comes the knock at the door. LOL I bet Aya's ready to kill whoever it is, whether friend or foe.
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  • From Ginny on June 18, 2007
    Awww this is so sweet and sad... I can't wait to read more. I love how Asuka wanted to deserve because Yohji kept on calling for Aya in his sleep. That's a very good find.
    It's so sad that Omi has gone all Mamoru!
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  • From ANON - aleiah on June 18, 2007
    Another great chapter! I really want to know who the woman is that's after Yoji. What's her motive and what would killing him accomplish? I look forward to the conversation between Y & A. They have a lot to settle.
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  • From ANON - aleiah on May 24, 2007
    Yay, an update! This chapter was just as good as the first. I was wondering what happened to Yoji at the end of the first chapter and now he's being hunted. Yoji's hospital situation and Aya & Omi's convo built some really good tension. I look forward to chapter three!
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