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Reviews for The School Bag

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - sentinel28a on June 17, 2007
    It's always the quiet ones you've got to watch out for. (Which means Rei is likely very quietly the Ron Jeremy of the Eva set.)

    Never thought Hikari was one of THOSE...
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  • From LordSaturn on June 08, 2007
    I have to admit this is interesting; having Hikari a dominant is not completely OOC. Other stories I’ve read have her as a submissive (Rx7 for example) and that always seemed strange. I had a little trouble with how wimpy Toji was but my characterization is not a shining example so I’m not throwing rocks.

    All in all a great well written story.

    DC (AKA94saturn)

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  • From ANON - Wow on May 12, 2007
    Dude, really good adult fanfic here.
    You made Touji/Hikari interesting and hot! Definitely love the domination going on here...
    I almost wish you'd continue it.
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