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Reviews for Misty Needs Help From Ash

By : echoheart9
  • From rayzak131990 on May 20, 2007
    a few too many and's. also try to make it a bit longer. but keep up the good work! make another one about what ash does to her next like make her do all of his stuff or make her wear a dog collar or something. its good to see a story about the origonal characters.
    P.S. sorry if i sound a bit like an ass!
    scincerely, V
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  • From Bishonen on May 20, 2007
    Well that was an average story you need to wrok on your style this story could be good but the dialogue was flat and everything was just a bit boreing if you wroked on that then htis could be a much more interesting story

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From RAW19 on May 20, 2007
    this version of ash, and all characters like him, really ticks me off. the story was nice though.
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