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Reviews for Upgrade

By : Bishonen
  • From LunaAddictus on April 04, 2008
    hehehe, very nice! i've always wondered what would happen if chachamaru got an "upgrade" and well... this story definitely met my expectations.

    now, all you need to do is write another quickie that details eva's "tests" xDDD
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  • From Skull on November 05, 2007
    Nice story but I do say that only one thing was off:Th e speed of their orgasms that is the only thng it wold take some time and such but other than that tennie little problem this is one of my favorite yuris (I hate Yaoi) I never see these characters in any Fics

    -Skull J. Darkmaster "Friend and Allie"
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  • From ANON - 1 on July 11, 2007
    I stole this song but it's perfect for this argument


    Yuri, yuri, yuri-yuri! It appeals to all the masses and keeps people from doing all their taxes!

    Yuri is sex between to women that guys like

    And that they think are hot

    In other words it’s not het! Its yaoi with women in a man’s place

    If you think it’s a drag move along before I push it all in your face!

    Chorus:

    Yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri go read ya some right and keep it on your ‘puter!

    Yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri, yuri if you have to think about then biotch you are a loser!

    Some peeps go for yaoi if but if you are like me

    You’ll go read lots of yuri then my friend you will see!

    Yuri, yuri, yuri go and spread it ‘cross the nation

    Yuri’s very good for hand-eye coordination!

    Verse2:

    Feminists now hate because they think I am afraid

    And I say to those women “you need to get laid!”

    And if you are a girl and you still cannot get laid

    Write it on the ‘puter and I will be your friend!

    I am not so chauvinist that this is all I think about

    I just can’t help that so many chicks are HAWT!

    They deserved to be slashed!

    They deserved to be bashed!

    And if your name is J. Lo

    Need to hand over that ass!

    (Chorus 2 xs)

    Please don’t get the wrong idea I do like other things!

    Like dogs and cats and kittens and Colorado Springs

    But when yuri is on my mind I just can’t get it out

    It keeps me up late at night when I have a whack-off bout!

    If you think this song is crazy then let me tell you

    I’m just repaying goodness giving credit where it’s due!

    (Chorus 3 xs)

    Yuri, yuri she’s my friend

    Be there to the very end

    Yuri, yuri I love you and you should love her too!
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  • From Bishonen on July 09, 2007
    This is to 4 World I like yuri you like yoai and this site is called Adult Fanfiction it is not about just one thing if you dont like yuri than thats fine but keep it to yourself if you only want yaoi go somewhere else becasue there are a lot of yuri lovers out there and a lot of yoai lovers and some dont like the other so just go to some yaoi site and read till your happy but DON'T GO AROUND TRYING TO TELL OTHERS WHAT TO DO I dont go around telling yaoi writers to give up just because I like lesbain stories so in short i have one last thing to say to you

    If you dont like Yuri than dont read it

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae

    P.S.:FUCK You

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  • From ANON - 4 World on July 09, 2007
    i've seen u writing these stories, and i just wanna say, stop even trying! this site is ment to be for yaoi, all this lesbian stuff is just anoying, just stop writting, u cant change anything anyway!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2007
    your back!
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  • From quamp on July 01, 2007
    An interesting story. I've always had a bit of trouble keeping Chachamaru in character.

    However, you might want to go back and fix the beginning of chapter 1 where it says this fic would be two chapters long. (This is the only complaint I have about it.)
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  • From ANON - S!th L0rd on June 20, 2007
    The second chapter was hot! Keep it up! But it could be a little longer but nevertheless it was hot!
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  • From Mangafreak on June 19, 2007
    awesome new chapter!
    Your humble servant and fan
    -Twisteddarkness-
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2007
    MOAR
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  • From ANON - S!thL0rd on June 09, 2007
    Not bad second chapter in the making?
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  • From Mangafreak on June 07, 2007
    i see much potential in this story. please tell me that there is going to be more.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness-
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